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Posted By: VirginiaR FDK - Good Directions (1/1) - 12/30/11 12:32 PM
Ooooh! A forward Lois! Me likey. I liked how she made J&M nervous about the alien talk. And how she missed the turn-off and the friendly banter between Pete and Clark. Lots of fun with possibilities! Cute!
Posted By: Artemis Re: FDK - Good Directions (1/1) - 12/30/11 12:43 PM
Cute story! Anything more hiding on your computer? smile Like a followup?
cool
Artemis
Posted By: Darth Michael Re: FDK - Good Directions (1/1) - 12/30/11 01:08 PM
wave So, what’s brewing on the light side?
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Lois jabbed violently at the buttons on her rental car’s stereo system, but all she could get was static and one exceptionally dull talk-radio station that was currently discussing agricultural trends.
GGGoH?

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The train that had taken fifteen minutes to pass was finally dragging its last boxcar across the length of track in front of her.
Nah, sounds like she’s alone here.

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“Crop circles! Hah!” She scoffed to herself as she drove over the bumpy tracks toward the dirt road.
So, a younger Lois?

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An assignment that had promised to be a legitimate story about possible life forms, visiting from other planets, turned out to be a bunch of teenagers pulling pranks on unsuspecting farmers.
Did Lois tick off Perry so he decided to send her to the country side so she can cool off a bit without getting into trouble?

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“There’s nothing even remotely close to an alien life form anywhere near this god-forsaken town, unless you count rednecks as aliens.”
Umm…

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Somewhere in the distance she could make out what looked like a car on the side of the road, and she hoped with everything in her being that she wouldn’t come across the bleached bones of a lost person who broke down and was never rescued.
wave Michael
Posted By: MrsLuthor Re: FDK - Good Directions (1/1) - 12/30/11 01:22 PM
Haha aww! Thanks guys!

No, I don't have a follow up piece, but I could work on one.

I have a few other random pieces, but one of them is probably going to get me murdered.

peep It's a Lex & Lois story! Eeep!

It would be a good ice breaker for the longer one I'm working on about Lois & Lex though, so maybe I should post it!
Posted By: Darth Michael Re: FDK - Good Directions (1/1) - 12/30/11 01:49 PM
shock shock shock shock shock shock shock shock

/runs around screaming/

Okay, I'll bite.

/starts looking for the L&L and the Hick&Lois one wink

Michael
Posted By: Deadly Chakram Re: FDK - Good Directions (1/1) - 12/30/11 02:00 PM
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“Crop circles! Hah!” She scoffed to herself as she drove over the bumpy tracks toward the dirt road.
hyper

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“No, I got halfway up Airport Road when I realized I forgot something.” She said with a smile.
"I forgot to say that you are gorgeous and my name is Lois."

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“Here.” She said, handing him the thermos. “You looked thirsty when I came by earlier.” She lied.
Coward. :p

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“Some of your mother’s sweet-tea.”
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“Lois Lane? Daily Planet?” Clark asked, obviously shocked. “I have a job interview next week with the Editor, a Perry White? I’ll be in town for a few days.” Clark explained excitedly.
Wahoo!

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“I’ll give you a call when I’m in town then.” Clark said with a confident nod.

“I look forward to hearing from you.” Lois said, her eyes connecting with his for a long moment before they said goodbye and she disappeared up the dirt road again.
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What a delightful little tale! Love it!
Posted By: MrsLuthor Re: FDK - Good Directions (1/1) - 12/30/11 02:23 PM
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Originally posted by Darth Michael:
shock shock shock shock shock shock shock shock

/runs around screaming/

Okay, I'll bite.

/starts looking for the L&L and the Hick&Lois one wink

Michael
Haha! I'm going to post the short L&L one in a little bit. I'm just rereading it and changing a few things. Apparently I do that POV jump thing a lot without even realizing. I never really noticed it before, but this L&L one does it in the most horrible ways!
Posted By: Mouserocks Re: FDK - Good Directions (1/1) - 12/30/11 04:13 PM
Cute story! I liked how it was a sort of sweet prologue to the series. Can't wait to read what else you've got! I like Lex well enough to tolerate that (plus I'm currently pondering a very similar Lois/Lex situation, so I'm in the mood wink )!
Posted By: MrsLuthor Re: FDK - Good Directions (1/1) - 12/30/11 04:50 PM
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Originally posted by Mouserocks:
Cute story! I liked how it was a sort of sweet prologue to the series. Can't wait to read what else you've got! I like Lex well enough to tolerate that (plus I'm currently pondering a very similar Lois/Lex situation, so I'm in the mood wink )!
Haha! I can always count on you to support even my most hair-brained ideas! Can't wait to read your L&L story too!
Posted By: Morgana Re: FDK - Good Directions (1/1) - 12/30/11 05:36 PM
What a sweet little story! Anything with Jonathan and Martha is alright with me. hyper

Yikes! Mrs. Luthor you better duck! A story featuring Lex and Lois? Talk about turning tables! Does Clark and the rest of the newsroom gang know?

Can hardly wait. dance
Posted By: Anonymous Re: FDK - Good Directions (1/1) - 12/31/11 10:04 AM
Interesting, Lois and Clark meeting before he interviews at the planet. Great start to an alternate story. I think you should continue the story.
Posted By: Mouserocks Re: FDK - Good Directions (1/1) - 12/31/11 10:53 AM
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Originally posted by MrsLuthor:
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Originally posted by Mouserocks:
[b] Cute story! I liked how it was a sort of sweet prologue to the series. Can't wait to read what else you've got! I like Lex well enough to tolerate that (plus I'm currently pondering a very similar Lois/Lex situation, so I'm in the mood wink )!
Haha! I can always count on you to support even my most hair-brained ideas! Can't wait to read your L&L story too! [/b]
Unless it's Dan. Then my support is tortured at best. laugh
Posted By: Christina Re: FDK - Good Directions (1/1) - 12/31/11 01:09 PM
I really enjoyed this alternate beginning/meeting for the two of them. Do wonder how her past with Claude's going to play into it though if you do decide to make a followup.
Posted By: Laurach Re: FDK - Good Directions (1/1) - 12/31/11 01:31 PM
Adorable!
Posted By: shimauma Re: FDK - Good Directions (1/1) - 12/31/11 01:50 PM
thumbsup clap Bravo! That was a really great read! I've wondered over how it would have been sometimes if Lois had met Clark somewhere outside of Metropolis, something more country-fied, more in line with Clark's "natural" setting(and loved the "eye candy" observation).

I've seen other stories that addressed that option too, but this creation of yours is really sweet. Good job!

TEEEEEEEEJ
Posted By: Morgana Re: FDK - Good Directions (1/1) - 12/31/11 02:35 PM
Wait a second! Everybody is talking about how cute this story is, but nobody is mentioning the fact that Jonathan and Martha are running a DINER!

What's up with that? Where is the farm? eek
Posted By: MrsLuthor Re: FDK - Good Directions (1/1) - 12/31/11 02:37 PM
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Originally posted by Morgana:
Wait a second! Everybody is talking about how cute this story is, but nobody is mentioning the fact that Jonathan and Martha are running a DINER!

What's up with that? Where is the farm? eek
Haha! I just like the idea and putting those two in different situations. Maybe they have farm hands who manage the farm. They are pretty old.
Posted By: Tank Re: FDK - Good Directions (1/1) - 12/31/11 03:18 PM
Cute story.

Jonathan and Martha weren't always just farmers. In the silver age of comics during the run of Superboy comics, the Kent's ran the local grocery store.

So, anything is fair game.

Tank (who would like to see the follow up of Clark coming to Metropolis and Lois not acting the disinterested party)
Posted By: Morgana Re: FDK - Good Directions (1/1) - 12/31/11 06:51 PM
Tank.

Yeah, but BEFORE the general store they ran a farm, but because Pa Kent's heart condition got bad they sold the farm and brought a store.

I remember those comics very well.... wink
Posted By: Mad Dog Lane Re: FDK - Good Directions (1/1) - 01/11/12 08:57 PM
Wow...

I havent been hitting the boards as often as I should. Its been ages since I last came here.

I am pretty happy to find new, willing and creative authors around. Keep it up! thumbsup

MDL.
Posted By: MrsLuthor Re: FDK - Good Directions (1/1) - 01/15/12 11:34 AM
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Originally posted by Mad Dog Lane:
Wow...

I havent been hitting the boards as often as I should. Its been ages since I last came here.

I am pretty happy to find new, willing and creative authors around. Keep it up! thumbsup

MDL.
So glad you enjoyed it!
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