Sara, things have been so busy here that I hadn't realized that I never posted feedback on Part 6! But I'm still here, and still loving this!

I loved this exchange between Lois and Perry. Lois realizing that even though she didn't intend to tell any truths in there, that she in fact did, even if she was using them to hide what happened between her and Clark.

Kathy

Hi,

Great part.

Hi Sara,

finally, you posted! Still really great story , but Lois is soaking in self-pity. Make her feel better soon.

Lois Lane and the shrink. Can't get enough of that combination Wonder what Dr. Carlin is up to. Can't be anything good, though.

More soon

Julia

Sara,

As per usual, I love this story, and am following along closely. The emotion you are conveying with Lois is almost palpable in its intensity, and you can really sympathize (even though no one wants her to work sans Clark ) with her and her struggle to identify herself and her problems.

Amazingly artistic, and perceptive, I am excited about the next part.

-Jo

Sara

A wonderful part! She definitely manipulated the situation and poor Lois is becoming even more isolated than she already is.

I can't wait to see what happens next. Please post the next part soon.

Tricia

You know I'm loving this, Sara. Now that Lois can work on her own I expect a lot of trouble to come... Yay!!!

Just don't deny this poor reader of more UB!

Saskia

OOOhh!! Dr. Carlin!!

Post more soon!!!

Good instalment.

Liked the way you manuevered things so that Lois and Arianna, who should (and will) be deadly enemies are brought into an alliance. This could prove quite disasterous for Lois. Which could lead to ... WHAMS!

Yea!

Tank (who is just waiting for later instalments to bring up his brilliant solutions for Lois' prediciments)

Good installment. Just as Lois thinks she's not getting her way, Ariana comes in to "save the day" for her. I do have one concern, though. Not that I know much about psychiatrists, but don't they have to talk to a patient first before recommending therapy, e.g. working alone? If she were actually trying to help Lois, she'd try to find out if Lois actually needs any therapy first, I would think.

Sara,
wonderful part
ditto others
merry

I'm getting way behind on feedback, Sara, but had to tell you that I really enjoyed this section too. Poor Lois - she's really in a bad way!

Don't let Ariana get to her!!!!


Wendy