What a fun revelation! Love Lois getting superpowers with her pregancy.

Joan

Part 2 lived up to the promise of part 1. Well done!

A few of my favourite lines:

That is *so* Lois!

You had me going for a minute, there. I had thought for sure that she was about to figure out CK=S just then.

What delicious irony!

Well, she did ask for him to say something.

You had asked us to point out typos, so:

The first 'to' should be 'too'.

'laid' should be 'lay'.

'lay' should be 'lie'.

And one last suggestion: Could we have a sequel, please?

Joy,
Lynn

Oooh! I loved part 2! But you must give us more! Please???????

You know, I haven't felt the urge read any fanfic for months but after reading some of the comments on the first part, my curiosity was piqued and I had to read this story.

I really like the premise, but I have to say that I would have much preferred the story to have been drawn out over a few more parts, it all seemed a bit quick IMHO. Still, there's some great ideas in this story, and thank you for writing a fanfic that I wanted to read - you may have actually helped bring my muse back!

Oh, and I would be very happy to find out more about what happens next with Lois and Clark's relationship and the pregnancy.

Well done!

I loved, "It's yours, thankyouverymuch."

If your muse eats enough chocolate and feels the need to write a story about what happens next, I'd certainly read it. But IMHO it isn't really necessary - the story stands alone and the ending was perfect.

I love this. I felt similarly puzzled when I got pregnant - even though I was actually trying to get knocked up!

True... but it's a hell of a hurdle.

Dumped by telegram! Poor Lois. But it is funny.

Nice story!

Actually, I'm glad that Lex dumped Lois. Hopefully his insane obsession with her will not come to fruition.

LOl Very cute little story! Laura

Thanks Joan! For some reason I've always loved revelation stories. There are so many different ways to do it!

Lynn, thanks for the pointers! Now I've got my mind thinking of a sequel, yes... but I don't know if it'll materialize.

Heh, at least no one has said it's TOO long! I hear ya, but I just couldn't see drawing it out anymore than I did without it becoming a major angst-fest. Well, nothing wrong with THOSE, exactly, but I was trying more for a vignette, really. But to continue the story, yes... hmmm... *cogs grinding* *muses twirling*

Haha, I'm glad, too! Even though Barbarians at the Planet and House of Luthor are two of my favorite eps, that doesn't mean I necessarily WANT poor Lois to go down that road again!


Thank you so much for all the comments! If anyone has any other suggestions, I'll be happy to hear them.

Delightful tale.

What everybody said. Yeah, "make reservations at a hospital" got me too!!! That was a kick!
I was curious though, Clark is going to "go get this one", but how exactly is he going to do that without letting the brother and sister know who he really is?
Very good story and an enjoyable vignette. Just great.
regards
Artemis

oh what a fun story!! I love how Lois got dumped by Lex via telegram, LOL. Also loved the super powers that Lois was getting because of the baby. WELL DONE! Thank you for this enjoyable little story!

Just caught up with this ...

This was truly a great story!

I also laughed with Lois getting dumped via telegram, but felt really bad for her too

Lois explanation (low blood sugar and low blood pressure as a deadly combination) really cracked me up, because it really is a bad combination!

Thanks for sharing this!

I like this story!

Although, it's a bit short. Could we maybe get an epilogue? Or a sequel? Or something? Pleeeeease?

Highly enjoyable. I love how it took a couple of bad guys to lock them in a room to finally get them to talk.

You have Lois's personality down pat.

I respect anyone who can take such an all encompasing idea and make it work in 2 parts (says the woman with a 95 part story).

I also agree that a pregnant Lois would definitely develop super powers. My favorite super power... the ability not to develop stretch marks!

That's up to your imagination! I have a scenario in mind, but I kind of like the idea of letting the reader wonder about that -- just like the L&C writers left the viewers guessing at the end of certain episodes. It adds to the fun, I think!

And I respect anyone who can write such a long story and still keep all their characters and events straight! Not to mention KEEP GOING! I'm prone to distraction. *ooh look shiny object!*

Haha, nice! I've had Lois pg in some of my fics before, but this is the first time I've given her powers. My theory is that an earth woman who was pregnant with a Kryptonian child would have to be able to protect that child; hence, invulnerability and strength. As for the other ones, I couldn't quite see giving her x-ray vision or anything! But I think it's safe to say she'd be spared from developing any long-lasting physical effects, as you said.

Just got thought re-reading this on the archive .

Delightful, really great fun. So how about a sequel?

Oooooh, can't believe I missed this gem! Lot's of fun!

Michael