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The blue suit is here! dance

Thank you all for your kind words in the feedback! I'm glad you've all been enjoying this story! smile
It's always fun to read about the evolution of the costume and Superman. Of course, Lois comes up with the name. smile
Another great part!

Loved the suit fitting scene and of course Lois has to come up with the name! laugh

Jonathan is still Jonathan, weary of Lois and then Clark becoming a hero!

Can't wait for 11! smile1
The costume scene from the pilot was one of my favorite; I like your twist on it. Especially the whole Martha and Lois interaction. Martha understands what women-folk will be thinking. I love Clark's modesty, too. He's so cute.

So, what ARE they going to say to Perry? I think Lois should tell Perry that Clark Kent is friends with Superman and can get him exclusives with the superhero. That solves both of the problems with one swoop.

Are they going to go back to Europe?
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“Definitely,” I smile, glad I don’t have heat vision, as I’m sure I would catch Clark’s cape on fire with the dirty thoughts starting to spin around in my mind as I eye him in the suit.
Right there with you, babe. laugh
oh how i love this story! THANK YOU!!! I loved how you are bringing Superman to us - love it!
I can't imagine they're done with Luthor yet, so though I enjoyed this part, I couldn't help but feel a little bit of foreboding.

I loved the points you brought out about Lois wanting to belong to something and be accepted. That's something I've always loved about Lois & Clark--they were both exiles, of a sort, that found acceptance in each other.

Looking forward to what happens next!
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I wondered if Clark would mind his parents telling me about all of this, but I figured he wouldn’t have left me alone with them if he hadn’t wanted us all to get to know each other.
Indeed. Bringing his girlfriend home most certainly means the baby pictures come out laugh

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I meet the gaze of both of his parents, hoping to reassure them that I am only trying to learn about Clark, and not undermine him.
Hmm... yes. Finding out about him and then seducing him and his family could most definitely be the way to win a Pulitzer. /ponders the possibilities/ It also means Mayson would then have a chance at Clark and there's always Lex and Dan for Lois goofy

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I—I think I’m even falling in love with him
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So, what've you got cooked up for the debut then?

Michael

PS: I just remembered. Poor Tempus. Never going to have the chance to call galactically stupid now.
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