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This was great! The revelation went as well as it could have - Lois is hurt over the fact that she thought Clark was dead for those two days and now finds out he was still very much alive, even though she still needs to come to terms that the "Clark" disguise was "gone", but the person alive.

Very sad about Lois' dress and her shoes being ruined And I also liked the "guys who knows guys" part as an explanation!

Looking forward to the next part! (hopefully soon?)

Well, those remaining 8 parts sure look like it's not going to be all that easy. Wonder what you've got cooked up now

And how's he going to explain this?

Wonder if the bag will fall open and the still a bit wet clothes will soil Lois's jeep, too.

Oh boy. You sure have it in it for them.

/brows rise to hairline/ They aren't going to... well... you know. Because that would certainly allow for another 7 parts of story.

Oh, that's how he's going to do it. So, 7 parts of fallout, then?

Oh... boy.

Oh, boy. So, in the future, criminals will try to ensure Superman is in good graces with his girlfriend? And leave said girlfriend alone to keep him occupied?

Oh boy. Oh boy!

Oh... boy. You must definitely have it in for them.

And how long are you going to let us simmer like this?

Michael

Aw poor Clark. Hope she forgives him soon. Laura

Poor Clark. I hope Lois will forgive him.

Joan

Poor Clark. He had a good , then bad , then good And Clark had been honest with her. Did tell her the truth. He did fly over to her house, break-in and steal her clothes for her, so she wouldn't have to wear dog thrown-up on clothes. That's a hero in my book. She'll forgive him. But not anytime soon, I expect.

And now Clark can't even pick up the dog for her. That he paid the vet bills for. I hope his day improves. Sigh. Poor Clark.

I really have to thank the FoLCs about the shoes. I posted a question about Lois's shoes, and it sparked a whole long discussion on this thread: .

It was dcarson who pointed out that Lois certainly would not pay retail prices, as she knows guys who know guys. I immediately knew that I had to steal that line for the fic. Thanks!

"Deep vision" - I wish I could claim credit for this, but I can't. It's from Tandrelmairon's excellent Superman fanfic, "Getting Eaten Alive" . Highly recommended.

Yep, I'm piling on poor Clark. But he (probably) deserves it. It was Bobbart, in another thread, who pointed out that Lois going nuclear at the revelation wouldn't have happened until after "TOGOM". Before that, she would have been upset but not overwrought.

When she thought that Clark had been killed, and then she discovers that he was Superman and had never been in danger - after she learns that, that's when she would feel incredibly bitter and betrayed about the revelation. Or so Bobbart posits, and I must agree with him.

Thanks, everyone for the great feedback!

Hahaha. Wow. Lots of great parts in this. I think my favorites were when Moose ate the tiramisu and when Lois threw the teddy bear against the wall!

Boy, they are really having a rough time of it! And Clark is allowed to pay the bill...but not fetch the dog. That's gotta sting!!

At this point, it seems hard for things to get much worse. But I guess you've still got some stuff up your sleeve!!

I think the bit about Lois being especially upset after TOGOM (as opposed to before) is a good point. And I liked the other memories you brought in that she is suddenly able to connect the dots with.

Great part!! Off to the next!!

Excellent! Lots of little gems written into this chapter. Wow, smooth revelation there Clark. Love it!