FDK: Everywhere 19- Final - Lois & Clark Fanfic Message Boards

What a wonderful wrap-up to the story. My favourite lines:

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"I thought you enjoyed being my daddy the most."

Clark stopped in mid-air, looking at his son with a serious expression. "Being your daddy is like breathing, Lane. I wouldn't survive without you. We have a lot of time to make up for, but never doubt that you're the *best* thing I've ever done."

Awwww...

And, of course:

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The piece ended: 'Lois Lane, will you marry me?'

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"Painting the game room?" came Clark's reply, an expression of complete innocence on his face.

LOL!

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'Into tomorrow and beyond... in work and play... our home, my heart... I'll take you everywhere.'

I've never heard those vows before. Did you write them yourself? They're beautiful!

Joy,
Lynn

Very sweet wrap up. Enjoyed the whole thing and the happily ever after ending.

Jackie

Indeed, this was a very sweet wrap-up.

Ann

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"Do you think I'll be able to fly like you?"

Clark stared at him. He'd theoretically known that was possible, yet he'd never given it much thought. Did he want Lane to fly? Part of him did, wanted him to experience the joy he had the first time he'd crossed the sky. But another part wanted nothing more than for Lane to be just a normal kid, then an even more normal adult. He kneeled in front of the boy and reached out to take his hand. "Maybe you will. We just don't know. But if you do, I'll be right here to help you."

A very interesting answer. It shows Clark's ambivalence over his own powers. Sure, they're great to have - but the responsibility and the secrecy that comes with them is a burden as well.

I liked this wrap up! It was a nice touch with the boys and Clark. Very good job. Thanks!

Very special wrap up! Thank you so much for keeping at it as you could to finally finish it for us!
Smooth!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Aww... that was very sweet!

I liked the lines that Lynn and Iolanthe pointed out too!

Thanks for finishing this up!!

Thanks to everyone who hung in there with me on this one. I know I dropped the ball, but I finally got it up.

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I've never heard those vows before. Did you write them yourself? They're beautiful!

Yes, Lynn, I wrote them. And thank you for the compliment. When my husband and I renewed our vows several years ago, I wrote the entire ceremony! I'm told by my joker of a son, that I have my moments of brillance.

Again, thanks to everyone who kept reading and commenting. I know I don't reply nearly enough.

SQD

Very nice ending! I love that we got a glimpse into Lois and Clark's future at the end.

Very well done!

~Sheila

Finally am catching up!

Great story! You wrapped it up so well. There's a lot of steamy tension in this fic, which was a lot of fun

I especially enjoyed the closing lines:

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'Into tomorrow and beyond... in work and play... our home, my heart... I'll take you everywhere.'}}}}

Those were some of the words he'd said to her that day. And those feelings- the way he'd felt that day- that was still what he felt today. The fire raged between them as strong as it always had. One touch could send him reeling. One kiss and he was lost. Just as Lois had done once, across space and back again, Clark had taken Lois everywhere

Well done! Thanks for sharing this fic!

Wow. Just wow. I started reading this story tonight and I couldn't stop. This was truly a roller coaster ride. The whole time I felt both Lois and Clark's emotions. Very, very well done!

I, too, started reading tonight and couldn't stop. Enjoyed the different twists (i.e. making Patrick not evil), how Clark handled the conflicts from the show without Lois there to help him (illness, NK, etc.)

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Lois claimed having a house full of boys was her penance for missing Clark so much over the years. Clark would laugh and tell her that God had broken the mold when he’d made her. There was no way another little Lois could occupy the same space.

I loved this paragraph. It described Lois and Clark to a T.

I wondered in the early chapters if they would go to their island after 5 years... I'm glad you didn't disappoint... even if it was a little longer than the 5 years.

When you first described the Bailey Ring, I thought they were talking about a completely different kind of ring. It would have been symbolic for them to use the Bailey rings for the wedding rings.... Ah, if they had gotten married instead of him leaving for New Krypton. But when he returned, journalism wasn't their life anymore.

I liked that you kept him wearing the engagement ring on a necklace around his neck while on New Krypton.

The whole battle over the blue liquid drink was fraught with tension. If I were Lois, I wouldn't want my kid drinking that stuff, either.

I liked your imagery of what New Krypton was like as well. I had pictured an astroid; you made it a real planet.

I found it interesting that you kept it Lois and Clark to the end. You didn't mention how Clark felt when he donned the blue suit or what it was like being Superman, again. I'd be curious what that scene would have been. Or did Superman never return from New Krypton, just Clark Kent? I'm sorry if I missed it, if you spelled it out.

Enjoyed your story. Hope to read more.