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Wow, I really, really like this. I was a bit worried at first because I'm one who--apparently a minority--believed Clark when he said Clark was who he was and Superman was what he could do...but you blew me away with the way you cataloged the different facets of the complex man who is Clark Kent, the whole man.

I think you really captured the voice of Lois Lane, and I love so many of the phrases peppered throughout this piece. My favorite is the one about how he's not too good to be true; he is true and good. But I liked so many others that it's hard to pick them out.

Thanks so much for sharing!

This was a cute rambling of Lois's mind. Nice! Laura

I loved it!

Right from here at the beginning: I love this side of Lois.

And I love the way she sees her three husbands.

Bob

Very nicely done!

Joy,
Lynn

I really like how you have Lois sounding a bit proud of herself, a bit cocky almost at having 3 men, but then it turns out that it is really her knowing what she has and how blessed she is to have Clark!

Great job with Lois' voice.

I love that she's acknowledged her former crush on Superman:

Joan

Very cute, Bren. I like the distinction Lois makes among Clark's various "personas". But, of course, her Husband deservers his capital letter, since that's who is he when he's alone with her -- his true self, the one only three people ever really get to see. Nice.

Kathy

That was cute and so Lois (or, at least, how I'd imagine Lois' ramblings in her mind would go like!)

I love this story! It does take three husbands to keep up with Lois Lane.

Isn't she glad the blinders finally came off?