So... whaddaya think? Feedback's almost as inspiring as it is addictive, so feed me lots, inspire me lots, and get lots more story!

Thanks in advance!

I'm quite intrigued by your story angle. Your Lois' thought processes of insight mixed with self-deception of her feelings sprinkled with regular bouts of truth, are fun in being so intermingled with the show's take and your detours. I really like it.

Looking forward to more!

I like her inner thinking! Very entertaining! Laura

So glad you have posted another part!

Yay! I loved part two! Now, I hope part three will be coming in the reasonably near future? <hint, hint, hit-over-the-head hint>

I wish I had more time to write more; but since I don't, I'll let the gremlins do my talking for me:



Joy,
Lynn

Love it! The self-deprecating humor and voice of Lois' internal monologue is loads of fun -- loving the subtext you're including on the familiar dialogue... PLEASE don't wait so long to post the next part! Lois and Clark in a hotel... and she knows the secret and he doesn't know she knows??!! 'Bout to fall over with excitement!

Gosh, FoLCs, Thank You!

It's great to see such a positive response to my version of Lois here. I've certainly not had so much fun getting into her head, as it were! Lois has always been a fun challenge to write, but doing so in the first person is a bit of a personal demon of mine, and this is the first story I've felt like I've got a really good sense of her voice, inside and out. I'm really glad to see you're all happily entertained by her!

Part Two of this Chapter is up! That fast enough? :p ...and I'm not sure what proper FDK-thread protocol should be for a multi-part single chapter of such a long story as this will be, so unless y'all tell me otherwise, I thought I'd leave this as the single thread for all comments on this Chapter. I'll open a new thread for each separate Chapter, but since each of those is the equivalent of an episode and turning rather lengthy, it's easier to write and post it in these smaller parts. That work for everyone?

Yes, this chapter was a lot of fun!

Ann