Yay! Chapter Six is up!

Feedback is welcome (Read as: If you think this sucked, please tell us why so we can fix it.)

Thank you very much to those who are reading this! To those who aren't, thanks for looking at this thread anyway!

Hmm, finally taking the plunge to give some feedback...

Generally, I really love your story. It's quite original, and, as I'm always curious about "new" cultures (make that new for me, for I hardly know anything about Asian cultures), I really like the idea of the Japanese Princess.

What I loved most about this chapter, though, was its last line. It's pretty obvious, really, and I had suspected something of that sort for a while. I still don't understand why the kimono turns out to have almost mystical healing properties, though. Probably the very same stuff?

Yeah. I believe Aki will be explaining that pretty soon. Says it ties up to a part of why the Yakuza is after the Princess and how the young Lord of Gion will finally make an impression. Then of course, Superman will save the day and we'll all have an ending we like.

Admin note: This story has been removed at the author's request while it is reworked. It may be reposted here at a later date. Contact the author if you have questions.

LabRat