Yay, more Nan-fic!! A very Lois-centric chapter, but I did like Clark's musings about her not taking long to start bossing Superman around... and that he liked it. Also, her realization that Clark and Superman aren't exactly the same, since Clark's willing to do things Superman wouldn't. Very Lex-like dialog, too.

Want more!

PJ
(I know, I'm insatiable, it's awful!)

It's back! And another cliffhanger

Wonderful suspense, Nan! Interesting just how much Luthor is miscalculating the situation

Michael

Awesome to see another chapter! And the total chapter count keeps going up and up! That can only be good as it means more Nan-Fic to read! Yay!

All the other things I wanted to say the other posters have already mentioned, so I all I can say is ditto to their posts exactly!

Looking forward to the rest of the story real soon!

Cheers
Elizabeth

What a joy to find the latest installment of this engaging story! Well thought out and well written, as usual, and I can hardly wait for the rest. Of course, my inner geek is also wondering what Luthor's plan B is.

Thanks for sharing.
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Brian

Nice part, Nan.

I was sure that Lois was going to charge in and get caught by Nigel or Lex. I was pleased to see Superman show up to help with the safe.

Then again, Clark seems to have left the building.

This is a very insightful part: Please don’t make us wait too long for the rest.

Bob

Great part, Nan. Nice to see this story getting bigger. Keep it coming.

Artemis

I still wonder if there is enough evidence to take Luthor down. Now he has a vendetta against Henderson. This is definitely one of those situations where, "If you strike at the king, do not strike to wound. Strike to kill."

Thanks to everyone for the feedback.

I haven't quit the story -- there really should be only a couple of parts to go, but I've had to slow down -- my brother Jim had a heart attack 3 weeks ago and I've spent a good deal of time shuttling between Ramona and Escondido since then. Jim, who is handicapped, has never had to stay in a hospital before and I've visited him every day since.

I have the next part about half done, and hope to finish it this weekend.

Nan

I hope your brother is doing well soon.