Moonlight Kisses - comments - Lois & Clark Fanfic Message Boards

Sara!!

You evil daughter, you!!! I won't say anything for fear of spoiling it for the others, but the changes you made were perfect!!!!

Beautiful imagery and wonderful prose!!

More from you soon!

Missy

Oh, you evil evil evil person. Of course, considering who the story was for, I was expecting something along those lines. Now, all I have to say is...

*thud* I hate being right.

Great story, though.

Oooo Sara, I loved it. Evil, with a hint of mischief

Okay; if you weren't there already, you may now consider yourself fully initiated into the

Oh well... at least we know that El and Sas will love it - and Tank will probably quite like it too!

Wendy

Sara!!! Thank you so much for that story. I love it!

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He made a dive for the bedroom, panicking suddenly. Good grief, he was a mess! What was he going to wear?

Well, I don't mind you wearing nothing, Clark! I think that's a very good option here.

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"I was going to say, before we were so rudely interrupted..." she murmured, coming up behind him and slipping her arms around his waist, "...that it sounds - and smells - wonderful." Clark almost choked as her breath tickled his inner ear, his stomach muscles contracting sharply at the brush of her arms against them. The serving spoon hit the side of the pot with an almighty clang, and he steadied his hands, suddenly breaking into sweat. One more word, one more movement, and their entire meal would end up on the floor...

Who cares about food when you can get romance instead? Just turn around and kiss her Clark! You know you want it! I at least want to see it happening.

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An atmosphere that *she* had created. She had made the first move - heck, she had made *all* the moves! - and she was obviously trying to tell him that she had felt the shift in their relationship just as keenly as he.

Awwwwwwwwwwww. Well, I don't care makes the moves, it's just nice and waffy. Wonderful.

But at this point, I am starting to wonder where my whams are? I mean, half way through and not a sign yet!!

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Her lips were parted softly, her eyes dark with desire, and Clark groaned in the back of his throat, begging silently for willpower even as his lips found hers in a caress that was as heady and passionate as it was gentle. His lips stroked against hers, his tongue reaching out to tease at her teeth, and somewhere in the dim recesses of his mind, he became aware that she had shifted closer to him. Her knee was now pressing firmly against his thigh, sending out lightning bolts of fire and energy, while one of her hands stroked his chest gently through the light cotton of his shirt as its mate buried itself in his hair.

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. *happy sigh* Perfect!

Still no whams... I'm getting slightly worried.

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//When I fall in love... //

How did you know? I love that song! It's so perfect. /me goes to turn on the song and sing along

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"What would you do if I told you that it was the moon?"

Saskia

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"I love you too, Mayson,"

Jose

Sara,

Knowing Saskia and El, I knew that something evil this way was coming. I also knew from your lack of the name "Lois" that you were going to do something terrible to us. But my innate hopeful quality, my yearning for it not to be so *and* your beautiful writing kept me glued -- ever the optimist -- ever the dreamer that you shouldn't, wouldn't, couldn't.

And then you did it!!!!!!

How vile, how corrupt, how wonderful----a delightful touch of evil.

Barb.

I knew that was coming, but it was a fun little ride!

LOL....

That was great! Loved it!

One question though...why did Clark need (or even HAVE) a match? :p

-Breanna

Well done.

I have to admit that I missed it. I missed the fact that you never used Lois' name. In fact I had to go back and skim it over because I was certain that Lois was mentioned somewhere.

From your disclaimer I was waiting for something but missed your actual ending because, as I said, I missed that you didn't use Lois' name, which is usually a give away.

cute ending.

Tank (who says this just proves that there are several folcs on this board who are much more evil than he is)

I knew it right from when he opened the door that it was not going to be Lois<g> But I thought it was going to be either Sas or El, I din't expect Mason<g> Laura

Hi,

You are

Happy Birthday, Saskia and Elena party

Ahhhhhhh!

Okay, so I realized right from the start that a) Lois' name wasn't being mentioned so b) it had to be Mayson. But still...

Ahhhhhh!!!!!

Yet it's so beautifully written, which makes me want to add another evil face since it's not about Lois...but I can't because I've run out of graemlin space so here's a glare for you -_-.

Fabulously written!
JenD

Sara

Extremely well-written but very evil!

Happy birthday El and Saskia! party

Tricia

Just popping in for five minutes to respond to comments...

Missy,

- just has me puzzled. Why does everybody think I'm so evil? I haven't done anything to Clark, save put him in a relationship with a beautiful [yes, she is, don't you dare deny it!] woman. No prolonged angst, no violent whams -- not even a TE. So just why are people not happy here? I don't get it

Regardless of this tiny blip -- much appreciation for all these comments! Thanks, guys!

Sara

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I haven't done anything to Clark, save put him in a relationship with a beautiful [yes, she is, don't you dare deny it!] woman

I'm not going to deny it.... so I can go after Lois, she's free, isn't she?

/me ducking

That was so nice and WAFFy and romantic except for

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"I love you too, Mayson,"

What the...?
/me whimpers

Thankfully, I can peacefully ignore that one word.

Julie

Thud! I was afraid of that. It was getting painfully obvious that it wasn't Lois after the first few times you avoided using her name. I was actually thinking Lana at first, but since he was already Superman, it couldn't have been her.

Poor Lois. I wonder what she's doing right now? Entertaining Dan?

Amazing how one single word separates a beautiful WAFFy story from pure evil. There, I'll use it.

Wonderfully written, though.

Sara,
good story and I agree "evil"

Happy Birthday Sas and Elena
merry

Sorry, I'm very late, but just popping in to thank Julie, Roger and Merry for your comments. Glad you all liked it!

And

Sara

Beautiful, Sara!!

I only now got a chance to read it (had an awesome trip, though

I had to read it twice. I seriously thought you said "Lois" at least once in the reading but we are so blind by "Lois and Clark" sometimes are eyes play tricks on us...

You are

!!!!

But your descriptions are great! More soon from you I hope.

~L.L Wanna Be

Oh, Sara, evil!

Perfectly wonderful and waffy, although that Mayson bit was evil. I understand though, I should've known something bad was coming, considering it was written for Sas and El, but the ending really surprised me. Augh! Mayson!

Great fic, Sara!

Jana (who once had to say something nice about the sardine in a fic for Anna's sake, so she understands)

Hi Sara!
Sorry but I must say: you are

and thinking: She's SO

Carolyn(who ignoring the last sentence really enjoyed the fic)

Sorry sorry sorry! I'm really much too late, but I didn't want you all to go un-thanked <g>. So,

to El, L.L Wanna Be, Jana and Carolyn!

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I'm not sure what the others are complaining about. It was beautiful, very lyrical and waffy! Brava!!

Have I ever told you that you're my hero, El?

Thank you for seeing my point... I'm so glad that there's somebody out there who thinks the same way as I do

Does this mean I get an absolution from the Tipperary song??

No, seriously -- I'm very glad you liked it, and I hope you had a fantastic birthday!

And lol, L.L. Wanna Be! That's something that I hoped would happen... amazing how the mind can play tricks on you, huh?

Anyway, thanks once again!

Sara.