My thanks to Gerry for figuring out who was on the yacht and how he found Lois. I knew there was a yacht, but had no idea who was onboard or why they had kryptonite.

ML

/watches FDK thread pop up and now goes to eat breakfast while reading new ML fic/

Michael

Oh, you've got me wanting more already! You sure know how to end on a cliffhanger! LOL

Now, it'll be midnight here in 3 hours and 4 minutes! Can you post another chapter then? Hint, hint, hint! LOL

Another much enjoyed chapter and now that the action is hotting up I want more soon!


Elizabeth

whew! finally lois regains her memory... oh dear, is clark going to try and rescue her while he's still half incapacitated?

A-plot! Villains!

Gaaahh! Maybe I can get back to reading now, or not...

Ann

<mopes>

Yeah, Lois got her memory back

Then the villans showed up!

You are going to fix this, right? This will end with a happy ever after, right? Coz, we might need a warning if not

More soon please

Auugh! Poor Clark! Yay, Lois's memory is back! Can't wait to see where this goes.

My eyes were way too blurry and my head to fuzzy to read this last night by the time you posted [FIFTEEN MINUTES LATE ], but I did get to chat with Missy and get Missy fic in my inbox .

So I read this this morning.

Deter can take a flying leap into some underwater trench and stay there.

So glad Lois remembers! Now it's just a matter of time before she sends Deter into the deep and Clark goes after them

Wasn't expecting Deter. Much as I loathe him, you do have to wrap things up with him...

so evil!!!!
i should have read this last night when it appeared, but nooo, i had to save it for the morning, and now i'll be thinking about this all day!!!!! ahhhhhhhh

You ARE going to tell us why Deter is spending so much time, money and energy chasing after Lois, aren't you?

I mean, between wanting to take down Superman a few notches by wooing his 'girlfriend' and Miranda's drug, Luthor actually had a reason for going to such lengths to get Lois.

In the show, we never saw that with Deter. We never found out why he was willing to throw his career away chasing her in such an unprofessional manner.

Just a thought. :rolleyes:

Well, from what I remember from assorted documentaries, the nails were supposedly a much more severe punishment, so presumably, also a worse death. Oh, and you could get taken down again if next part shows up in time But in lieu of recent events, the following method could be preferable. Thus, one is able to bring the victim back from the brink to provide the next part

The victim dying of a broken heart after her great love gets blasted into oblivion

Lois remembers

But there's still the option of selling her body to Max...

Thus, he planted his knee in the thugs's back and gave the man's head a sharp twist until he heard the satisfying crunch of a broken neck.
/mutters about having watched too much 24 /


You know, I had really thought you'd do a pure waffy fluff-piece, but nooo, you just had to bring in the A-plot in the last 4 parts.

From last part's FDK:


But still...



More? Now? Forget EOD?

Michael

I'm currently sitting in the court house, waiting to talk to someone, and I think it's actually pretty cool being able to post things on the internet while I wait. Usually, I just sit here looking important.



Actually, this story will end the way all of my stories end... with my two favorite words in the English language: The End. Never have ended a story, that I can remember, with: And they lived Happily Ever After, so I doubt this one will end that way either.

And as to what they do after my story is over... who knows.

Gah. Evil. A plot. Deter.



Great part,
JD

Sorry I have not replied earlier. MLT it is all your fault! Because of the curling story I got caught up in watching the US Men Curling team. Who knew curling could be hypnotic to watch.

The US men lost in overtime (??is it called that)

Although it was nice to see men sweep with brooms

Anyone I was hoping the next part would be posted by now/ Please!!!

Kathy
www.chili-everyway.com

So Clark makes his escape? Deter hired rent a thug and well, you get what you pay for.

Me. I did.

It's actually called an extra end. But anyone would know what you mean if you called it overtime.



Anyway, next part should be up just after midnight EST.

ML

I'm usually very good at telling where a story is going to go before it gets there, but Deter caught me by surprise.

I would love it if Deter was arrested somehow for kidnapping Lois (he did hire six hit men, after all), along with attempted murder and blowing up that cabin (although I'm not sure whose jurisdiction that would be in); and Clark got away scott free when Lois convinces everyone she went willingly with Clark.


Elisabeth

I can see Deter's arrival on the island and subsequent 'abduction' of Lois as the perfect ploy to clear Clark of kidnapping charges - blame Dastardly Deter instead! - while at the same time ensuring Deter gets what's coming to him.

Can't wait for midnight EST!

Cheers
Elizabeth

How is it that every villain seems to be able to get Kryptonite?

At least Deter had to pay the high dollar for it. I'm glad it's not just out there on the street for pennies.

Yawn, I had just realized it was 11:46 and I thought, "I'll just see what it says on this feedback thread and then I'll go to bed."

So now I have to stay up.

You are cruel.

Part 12 was posted at 12:15 AM. Part 13 should've been posted at 11:45 PM to average it out.

malu

Nine more minutes. Just getting it ready now. But I also keep being distracted by men's figure skating so...

Excellent! I'm on the edge of my seat waiting!