Ooh, you liked it!
I'm so out of practice at this...
Michael, you're a hoot. Hope the actual story wasn't a let-down!
Kathy, thank you! It's so nice to know that the series hasn't been forgotten... I'm quite fond of it, myself.
Karen, yeah, Perry might twig sooner or later, but I didn't want to have him in on the secret yet, anyway. As for K... well, H was short, I was medium, and J was longish (for me, anyway!) so I'm a little worried about having to produce an epic :p Seriously, there are things in that universe that I'd like to address, but I haven't quite figured out how, yet. Plus the A-plot in MOSB was mind-bendingly stupid in spots, so that was giving me fits, too.
However, you never know. Thanks for asking, though!
Anne, I'm so glad you liked it. I felt I had to put links there in case people had forgotten about the series entirely (part 5 came out in, what, 2008?
), and I just couldn't squeeze that much backstory into this part without dragging it down entirely.
What a clever wrap-up to a unique take on our favorite couple.
Thanks... that's what I was aiming for. So many alt-Clark stories have him trying to explain everything to her, and that's fun, but I wanted to twist it so she was explaining it to him
And then it just grew from there...
Thanks, Elisabeth -- I know you said you were more used to Russian lullabies. Actually, I suppose they should have been speaking Bulgarian. I might yet change that, although, again, I wasn't sure how to explain it in context without going terribly off-tangent. It's been in my head for *years* that they would use Bulgarian and/or Russian to speak privately to each other in public. I even thought of having them split the difference, with her speaking Bulgarian and him speaking Russian, just to further encrypt things. But again, I didn't think I could fit that in here.
Ann, thank you for believing that Perry was fooled.
My betas originally thought he saw right through her, so I went back and made it more definitive. As I said above, he might get there, but I'm not ready for that yet.
Great idea, but just exactly where would he carry it? There isn't much extra space in that skintight suit. I think an ATM card would make a very noticable rectangular shape on his, well, wherever he would carry it!
LOL! I hadn't considered the problem, but I think he could probably tuck it into his belt, or maybe sneak it behind the S shield, or something... Anyway, so glad you liked it.
Thanks, Iolanthe, getting altClark his privacy back was my goal, especially since I'd made the tabloids so very intrusive in this universe. The whole series was me saying "Hmm, here's a problem. Okay, here's a solution. Good. No, wait, that causes another problem..."
Sorry about the "end" part, cookiesmom
But I *think* I've run out of problems to solve, so this feels finished to me. Glad you liked it otherwise.
Okay, my reply is going to be take up more than half the thread, so I'll stop now.
Thanks everyone, for reminding me how much I love getting feedback
PJ