Brenda Thanks, Brenda. Good point regarding Kal never having to ask for things more than once.
Rats! Now I have another two days to wait for the next post.
See note at the end of my thread.
Sheila See part 18
(I've just sent it to Iolanthe)
Laura I love this Lois! She is determined!
Now she is recovering a little from the shock of being on a new planet, Lois is becoming more Lois.
lcfan99 One thing I have noticed. Every Kryptonian seems to have a one syllable name. Is this a coincidence, or is there a reason behind it? Then Lois comes along with a two syllable name.
Jor, Kal, Trey, Ching, Nor - a lot of the males of NK seemed to have one syllable names. I decided to copy, but extend it to females as well.
*After* I had written a lot of the fic, I had the idea that there could have been some north/south differentiation in the names ... but it was too late by then.
Thanks for your comments.
Ann I really hope that Ching is jealous and wants Za for himself. That way, it might be possible for Kal to divorce her and allow her to marry Ching instead. And then, Kal would be free to marry Lois.
That would certainly solve a few problems.
Thanks, Ann.
Shadow Yeah, it was a sad part - but there were hints at the end that things will get better.
Thanks.
Bob You're right - Lois promising not to leave Kal is a big step forward.
Thanks, Bob.
Pat Your idea put a picture in my mind of their wedding night!! Oh, dear.
I'm not saying one thing about the secret, but I am enjoying everyone's ideas.
Thanks, Pat.
Vicki I'm glad you're still enjoying it, Vicki. Thanks for all your wonderful FDK.
Re - your theory - dismissing all thoughts of my fic for a moment ... that had the beginnings of a great story. For me, the crux would be this ...
Or why anyone would kidnap an earth baby and take him to Krypton.
If you could think of an answer to this and also why the NKers would make him their Supreme Ruler and why Nor would allow it ... I see real possibilities.
So ... Kal is becoming more Clark and (see Laura's comment), Lois is becoming more Lois!
Amber Yes, it was a sad part - but there haven't been too many sad parts so far.
Thanks, Amber.
Emma Thanks again - you are almost beta'ing this fic!
Re Kal and his continuing proposals - in some ways he did a Lois Lane and jumped right in without thinking it through. He could see so clearly what Lois had described and knew he wanted it with her. So, he went for it before getting it totally clear in his own mind exactly what he was asking.
Of course, Lois was looking at it from a different perspective.
How cruel was the trick you played at the end of part 13's FDK by the way!!
Actually, most of what I said was true - I had realised there was a problem with part 15 and I did intend to fix it and then get 18 to Iolanthe.
But everyone had asked so nicely for the next part, I was swayed towards getting it posted first.
And I did 'fess up straight away!
EDIT -
Laura and Brenda nice ideas ... keep them coming!!
OK ...
There have been a few comments about how I've mostly posted every other day (despite me saying right at the start that I would try for twice a week).
Well, there's going to be a bit of a slow-down in posts for the next few weeks. The reason is that myself and my 10yo son are traveling to Canada to visit my daughter/his sister.
She has a computer (so I can write) and some internet access (so I can post) and I have a long, long flight to get the rest of this story finished.
I still intend to continue posting this fic, but it won't be EOD. When I first started posting, I knew that the wise option would be to leave it until I returned from Canada. However, I was just so excited about it, I couldn't wait.
Part 15 has a horrible, deliberate, evil
cliffhanger at the end. My plan is to post that part, then, rather than leaving you hanging, try to post at least part of 16 before I get on the plane and have no internet access for 32 hours.
I really appreciate all your FDK - please keep leaving your comments/speculation/ideas ... but please understand if my replies are brief. If I have to choose between posting a new part and replying to FDK, I'll post the part ... but please don't think I don't appreciate the FDK. I do, more than you could realise.
Corrina.