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Posted By: Female Hawk FDK - So Many Questions (14/14) - 08/02/09 07:57 AM
So ... that’s it for Fic 4.

Fic 5 is called ‘Led Astray’. It *may* be posted in September, depending on whether I can –

1 - drag my muse back from being seduced by a completely different LnC story

2 – keep it to a reasonable length (6-8 parts) and

3 – find the time to write.

If I fail to do any of these, Led Astray won’t be posted until November or even December because in October I’ll be in Canada visiting my beautiful daughter!! dance dance


I have a teaser, which I’m willing to post – although be warned – a better choice could be to just leave Lois and Clark in their wedded bliss for a few months.

(Meaning - Led Astray does not have the sweet lead-in that Adrift and SMQ had).

Thanks to everyone who left FDK. It really means a lot to me that you read and enjoyed my story.

Corrina.
Posted By: cookiesmom Re: FDK - So Many Questions (14/14) - 08/02/09 09:06 AM
A perfect ending to a wonderful story.
Posted By: Artemis Re: FDK - So Many Questions (14/14) - 08/02/09 10:08 AM
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He unchained his smile – and the breath he hadn’t known he’d throttled. She smiled back at him, detonating the thousand dormant pockets of excitement within him.
Awesome writing, awesome story. Keep on writing whenever you can. Love this series.
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Artemis
Posted By: amberlea Re: FDK - So Many Questions (14/14) - 08/02/09 11:40 AM
Oh, that was so great! I think I'm perfectly happy to leave them in wedded bliss for awhile until you're ready to post the next part. smile

I loved the conversation they had before the wedding...how ready and willing Lois was to restore their relationship and not hold Clark's behavior against him. And what a picture of how much Clark thinks of Lois - that he felt that his powers helped bring him to her level. How lunkheaded, but how sweet!

Enjoy your visit with your daughter!

Amber
Posted By: bobbart Re: FDK - So Many Questions (14/14) - 08/02/09 12:52 PM
Wonderful! And so much here...
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“You think my powers will return,” he guessed.

Lois nodded. “It’s who you are.”

“Will you be disappointed if they don’t?”

“For you, yes. For me, no.”
This was the perfect reply. It's exactly what he needed to hear.

Later, I particularly enjoyed this part:
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“Clark, I still don’t fully understand why you expected I would be unsure about marrying you.”

Her words made him surprisingly uncomfortable considering the intimacy they had just shared. “It’s not that easy to explain.”

Lois smiled. “That’s OK.”

He brushed back the lock of dark hair from her cheek. “It’s just ... you’re so perfect. You’re so ... you’re everything I’m not – daring, intuitive, independent, passionate, fiery ... beautiful, sexy ...” Clark glanced away. “I thought my powers balanced the ledger a bit.”
That's very correct for this Clark. He hasn't had the time and experience to grow confident in himself as "just Clark". It didn't occur to me that he was struggling with self-doubt if "just Clark Kent" was enough for Lois.

Very nicely done for this section and the overall story. I am looking forward to the next part even though the title and your description have an ominous feel to them.

Bob
Posted By: IolantheAlias Re: FDK - So Many Questions (14/14) - 08/02/09 07:39 PM
I was privileged to beta this wonderful story and got to see it early! It was a tremendous treat. It will definitely be on my Kerth nomination list. I wish I had the words to describe how good it is. But hopefully, everyone that's in this FDK column has read the story, so they know themselves.
Posted By: Female Hawk Re: FDK - So Many Questions (14/14) - 08/03/09 12:12 AM
cookiesmom Thanks for all your feedback. I'm so glad you enjoyed my story.

Artemis Thanks for reading and for the encouragement. This is a great place to post fanfic.

Amber Good idea - just think of them enjoying being married ... because things go wrong Line 1, Led Astray evil

I love writing Clark as just a little bit hesitant ... now he's married that will probably be less so, but it was fun while it lasted.

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Enjoy your visit with your daughter!
Thanks, I will. Can't wait!

Bob Yep, it's all been very quick - Clark is still trying to catch up ... and having a run-in with kryptonite didn't help.

RE - the next bit sounding ominous ... it won't be anything that can't be fixed.

Thanks for all your FDK.

Iolanthe Thanks.

I'm so glad you enjoy betaing for me and don't find it a drag. Thanks again ... this story is definitely better for your input.

Corrina.
Posted By: Darth Michael Re: FDK - So Many Questions (14/14) - 08/03/09 01:12 PM
Corrina, that was a great ending! clap

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“It won’t make you late? I mean …” Clark grinned, a little hesitantly. “Don’t you have a wedding to prepare for?”

“Meh, I’ve got plenty of time.” Lois’s eyes danced. “The groom is a *very* patient guy.”

The dual prong of her words hit him and Clark could do no more than stare at her, grinning. It seemed an eternity since the last time she’d bantered with him.

But her words carried so much more than a little dig at his past. They carried her promise ... and her anticipation ... and her desire ... for their future.

Which left him breathless. Speechless. And *very* impatient.
That part has so many grins in there, and for so many different reasons laugh

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“It’ll take ten minutes,” he murmured.

“Let’s go.”

Who needed superpowers?
laugh

Michael
Posted By: sarahg Re: FDK - So Many Questions (14/14) - 08/03/09 04:15 PM
wow. loved the final part, and the whole thing! sweet, intense, exploring parts of their relationship we don't see in tv...love your writing style and stories. September can't come too soon!
Posted By: Sheila Re: FDK - So Many Questions (14/14) - 08/03/09 10:44 PM
Female Hawk, I am so glad that Clark finally got his act together and followed the script that Martha gave him sequentially. evil Smart boy. I thought it was sweet how Clark waited at the church for Lois just to make sure that she knew everything before they married. And that dialogue was so sweetly written. Thank you for sharing!

~Sheila
Posted By: robinson Re: FDK - So Many Questions (14/14) - 08/04/09 09:42 AM
Great part, wonderful ending. I also like the nfic piece. Thank you for a wonderful story
Posted By: Female Hawk Re: FDK - So Many Questions (14/14) - 08/04/09 09:15 PM
Michael About a week ago, I spent at least an hour on those few lines you quoted. I'm glad you enjoyed them - it was worth the effort to get it right.

Thanks for all your FDK, Michael.

Sarah - Thanks for reading and commenting, Sarah. Glad you're enjoying the series.

Sheila - Mostly, Clark does get his act together ... it just took him a little time. Thanks for leaving comments.

robinson - I always worry that the end won't do the story justice, so I'm really glad you liked the ending. Thanks.
Posted By: flowerpot Re: FDK - So Many Questions (14/14) - 08/06/09 08:20 AM
loved that conversation b/w Clark and Lois, and the vows <sigh>

can't wait for pt. 5 although leaving them in their wedded bliss for awhile sounds alright... since it took so much to get them there smile
Posted By: Female Hawk Re: FDK - So Many Questions (14/14) - 08/06/09 06:39 PM
Thank you flowerpot. I struggled with the vows for a long time - I wanted to make them special and significant, but not just a repeat of things LnC had already said to each other.

Thanks for your FDK.

Corrina.
Posted By: Kathryn84 Re: FDK - So Many Questions (14/14) - 08/08/09 06:39 AM
I loved your ending. The perfect ending for a perfect fic. They are so sweet together.

You said things will change for them from the very beginning of the next fic ... I wonder what will happen.

I am happy for you that you can visit your daughter. Enjoy your visit and don't worry about your muse ... I'm sure she'll get back to work when she's ready. laugh
Posted By: Female Hawk Re: FDK - So Many Questions (14/14) - 08/11/09 04:29 AM
Thanks for your comments, Kathryn. I'm glad you enjoyed the fic.

If I can get fic 5 written, I can plot fic 6 during those long hours on the plane. That's the plan, anyway!
Posted By: mozartmaid Re: FDK - So Many Questions (14/14) - 09/24/11 02:51 AM
Yay!! Most excellent!! LOVED the ending!! But um, weren't there supposed to be TWO more stories? thumbsup
Posted By: Female Hawk Re: FDK - So Many Questions (14/14) - 09/24/11 11:00 PM
Hi MozartMaid

So glad you enjoyed this series. Thanks for the FDK.

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But um, weren't there supposed to be TWO more stories?
Yes.

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Did they ever get written?
No blush

From my original post in this thread ...

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Fic 5 is called ‘Led Astray’. It *may* be posted in September, depending on whether I can –

1 - drag my muse back from being seduced by a completely different LnC story
Well, I couldn't. That was Awaken My Heart which took over my muse for four months. From there I went to Treasure Chest, Aussie Rules, and Trusting Me, Trusting You

I haven't given up on this series. I planned to edit First Days in Metropolis (done) Adrift (doing) and So Many Questions for the archive and then get back to writing Led Astray. I have about two parts written and most of it plotted.

Thanks again for your interest. Hopefully, the fifth story in the series will be on the boards before the end of the year.

Corrina.
Posted By: sarahg Re: FDK - So Many Questions (14/14) - 09/25/11 12:44 AM
please come back to these soon! love this story! and all the others really, but please?
Posted By: Darth Michael Re: FDK - So Many Questions (14/14) - 09/25/11 01:53 AM
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Hopefully, the fifth story in the series will be on the boards before the end of the year.
Ooooooooo! hyper

Michael
Posted By: Artemis Re: FDK - So Many Questions (14/14) - 10/22/11 10:23 AM
How about a Christmas Present? Pretty Please?
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Artemis
Posted By: Female Hawk Re: FDK - So Many Questions (14/14) - 10/22/11 07:45 PM
Thanks for the interest and encouragement. smile

I have written four parts of the fifth story, Led Astray. It wasn't easy getting back into this universe, but it's coming together slowly.

I hope to post the first part in about two weeks.

Corrina.
Posted By: Darth Michael Re: FDK - So Many Questions (14/14) - 10/23/11 12:44 PM
*Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee*

/whipsers/
Maybe a short summary and dramatis personae to get started? It's been a while blush blush blush

Michael
Posted By: Female Hawk Re: FDK - So Many Questions (14/14) - 10/28/11 10:41 PM
In response to Michael's suggestion, here's a brief outline of the first four stories in the Time to Love series.

Obviously, it includes a lot of spoilers. If you would rather read the entire stories

1. Weekend in Smallville
2. First Days in Metropolis

Those stories are on the archive. The next two will be there soon. Meanwhile ...

3. Adrift
4. So Many Questions

I am hoping to begin posting the fifth story, Led Astray, in 7-10 days.


1. Weekend in Smallville.

Lois is annoyed when Perry sends her to Smallville, Kansas. Not even the information that mystery man/possible government agent, Franklin Hodge - the target of some of Lois's earlier investigative efforts - will supposedly be there is enough to make it seem anything more than a wasted weekend.

Things only get worse when she arrives and discovers that she doesn't have a reservation at the only hotel. She calls Perry; he remembers receiving a résumé from a 'Clark Kent' of Smallville and calls his old friend who is listed as a referee, ascertains that the Kents are good people, and arranges for Lois to stay there.

In the bedroom of their absent son.

Who arrives home early the next morning, showers, and goes into his room, dressed only in a towel.

After such an uncomfortable meeting, Lois is expecting breakfast to be awkward, but she is pleasantly surprised by the relaxed family atmosphere and Clark's quiet country-boy manners.

Later in Smallville, she runs into Franklin Hodge, and for the first time, believes there could be a story. Clark - a reporter for the Smallville Press - offers to help her, which she doesn't want, fearing his objective is to steal her story.

They investigate together - her prickly and suspicious, him seemingly straightforward and open. They discover that Hodge is in Smallville to meet with two scientists - Max and Sheridan Sewell. Lois and Clark follow Hodge to the meeting and discover that the Sewells are claiming to have found a spaceship, including evidence of the alien life it brought to Earth, and are offering the US government their silence and research findings for a payment of $1 million.

Leo Nunk is also tracking Hodge and hears the offered deal/attempt at blackmail. He does a little lazy research and discovers the juicy morsel that there is no record of the birth of the local reporter who is following Lois Lane around like a lapdog. Figuring there is probably an explanation but knowing his editor will print the story for its sensational value, he takes a photo of Clark Kent, butchers it a little, and submits his story.

However, he can't resist bragging to Lois that he scooped her. He arranges to meet her and gives her the photo as proof that the alien who came in the Sewells' spaceship is none other than Clark Kent.

Lois confronts the Kent family with Nunk's claims. Jonathan tells a story about a school friend of his who left for the big city, got into trouble with bad men, and brought her unregistered baby to the Kents, begging them to care for him. He shows the paper clipping, reporting her death a few months later.

Feeling an surprising need to protect Clark and his parents, Lois goes to Franklin Hodge and barters her evidence of his involvement in the Sewell story for documentation proving the Kents' original claim that Clark's parents had been killed when he was a baby.

The deal is done. Lois loses her story of Hodge's involvement in the blackmail attempt and subsequent disappearance of the Sewells but gains official proof of Clark Kent's birth and adoption by the Kents.

Lois and Clark write the story together, refuting Nunk's claims, and Lois leaves Smallville to return to Metropolis.

Clark watches her plane fly away, wishing there could be a way to be with the woman he has fallen in love with.

2. First Days in Metropolis

Perry, impressed by the dual efforts of Lois and Clark in the Sewell/spaceship/blackmail story, offers Clark a job at the Daily Planet.

Lois is concerned about how the naive country boy will survive the realities of big city life, and she is sure she will be hurt if she allows her attraction for him to develop into anything more substantial.

To her annoyance, Perry foists the newbie onto her, and he accompanies her as she works on the story of the new Luthor Hospital for Children. The hospital is to be a joint venture between Lex Luthor and the (very wealthy) Crawford family - specifically Sarah Crawford, recently widowed following the death of her husband, David.

As expected, Luthor is up to no good - which Clark realises quickly. He conducts his own investigation, keeping Lois out of it to protect her from danger. Of course, Lois realises something is happening, does some investigation of her own, and ends up captured by Luthor and imprisoned in one of his underground rooms. Her cellmate is none other than Franklin Hodge.

Luthor is monitoring them, hoping to gain information from their conversation. Hodge manages to convey this to Lois, and together they weave a story to trick Luthor into believing that Nigel St John is the target.

To check the validity of that, Luthor sends St John to inform Lois that Clark Kent has been shot and then watches for her reaction. She is distraught.

Clark takes his information to Henderson and is perturbed when the detective refuses to act on it. Eventually, Henderson - stressed and frustrated by the failure to nail Luthor - hints that Clark's discoveries are only a small part of a much larger crime organisation.

Clark suggests that a super-powered man he met while reporting on a mudslide in Borneo could be very helpful. Henderson is incredulous, but agrees to a meeting.

Later, Clark, wearing the suit his mother made, meets with Henderson, and together they plan the demise of Luthor's empire. Once Luthor is caught, Clark returns to Lois's apartment, fearful of her reaction to him excluding her. She isn't there, and his super-powered search results in him locating her in the underground room. He crashes through the roof - the first meeting between Lois and Superman. Clark is partly relieved, partly disappointed when Lois doesn't recognise him.

Back at ground level, Lois asks Superman a few questions about who he is, but mostly she is in shock over the death of Clark. Superman informs her that Clark is alive. He flies away, Clark appears, and Lois is so relieved, she doesn't try to hide her growing feelings for the man from Smallville.

Lois and Clark write the story, and a couple of weeks later, Clark works up the courage to ask Lois for a date. She accepts.

3. Adrift

The story opens with Lois and Clark's first date. They arrive back at Lois's apartment after the date and things are starting to hot up when they are interrupted by a knock on the door. It is two police officers who have come to inform Lois that both of her parents have been killed in a car crash.

Lois works through her grief, and Clark tries to support her. Their fledging relationship stumbles a little under the pressure, but they reconnect when Clark helps Lois write the eulogy for the funeral.

The day of the funeral arrives. Lois walks up to deliver the eulogy ... and sees Clark walking out of the church.

For Lois, this is the final straw, and she collapses, having to be helped back to her seat by Perry. After the service, she goes home, locks the door, and cries with the pain of loss and betrayal.

Meanwhile, Clark is rescuing orphans from a fire in Honduras. He arrives back in Metropolis, showers and changes into Clark clothes and goes to Lois's apartment, trying to deal with his own grief at having been unable to save two of the children.

Lois refuses to answer, and Clark goes back to the hospital in Honduras and spends the night watching Rosa - the final child he rescued - as she sleeps.

Back at the Planet the next morning, Clark is surprised that Lois is there, but not surprised when her attitude to him is cold and unforgiving. Later, he goes to her apartment and tries to explain why he had to leave the funeral, but she gets angry and orders him out. On his second attempt, he manages to get out the words, 'I'm Superman' and she is livid that Clark and his family lied to her.

Clark leaves Metropolis and returns to Smallville, sure that his short-lived relationship with Lois is over forever.

Lois tries to continue working, but she knows her work is sub-standard. Not even an interview with the recently retired Franklin Hodge gives her any enthusiasm for her work, and her story is so bad that Perry can't print it.

Three things happen. Lois attends a Superman rescue, and he treats her as just another member of the media. Sarah Crawford talks to Lois about grief and tries to explain Clark's feelings (although she doesn't know the real reason why he left the funeral), and Jonathan Kent comes to Metropolis and tells Lois that it was his decision to lie to her about Clark's origins.

During a game of golf with Sarah, Lois realises that what she wants most is to be with Clark. They abandon the game, and Lois flies to Smallville. Martha sends her to Clark's bedroom to await his return from Honduras where he has been helping rebuild the orphanage.

Clark arrives home and is shocked to find Lois in his room. She asks him to take her somewhere private. They talk, they apologise, and Lois decides to overcome Clark's feelings of not belonging by asking him to marry her.

He refuses to answer, but they sort out a lot of other things as they fly around the world, experiencing a series of sunrises.

4. So Many Questions

The story opens four weeks after Adrift. Clark has planned an ultra-romantic date, and during it, he asks Lois to marry him. She accepts, and they spend the rest of the weekend in Smallville beginning to plan the wedding.

Monday morning comes, and Clark doesn't arrive for their breakfast date, so Lois goes to the Planet alone, assuming he has been called away on Superman business. However, as the day progresses and there is no sign of either Clark or Superman, her anxiety increases.

For the next few days, she slowly unravels the mystery of Clark's disappearance, trying to work out which of Hodge, Henderson, and Scardino she can trust. She fabricates a story about Superman returning to his home planet to explain his disappearance.

Eventually, she is lured by Scardino to a warehouse on Bessolo Boulevard where she finds Clark - captured by Jason Trask who thinks Clark has information about Superman. The Sewells' research - including the spaceship and some strange green rocks - is also stored in the warehouse.

Hodge masterminds their escape, killing Trask and Scardino, and also losing his own life. Lois gets a weakened and wounded Clark out of the warehouse, and remembers Sarah's offer of the use of the cottage behind the Crawford mansion. Lois gets Clark there - to temporary safety, although they don't know if Henderson is working against them.

He arrives at the cottage - and reveals he is an old friend of Sarah's and was working with Hodge to try to bring down Trask. Everything seems to be resolved, but Clark - shaken by the experience of vulnerability and divested of his powers due to exposure to green rocks in the warehouse - withdraws from Lois.

Three weeks later, they arrive in Smallville for their planned wedding, although there is still a gulf in their relationship. Sarah and Lucy take Lois to Wichita on the night before the wedding (and she takes the opportunity to do a little follow-up research on the Sewells). Clark finally sees sense after a talk with Martha, and goes to the hotel in Smallville, only to find that the girls have left.

The next day, he dresses in his wedding outfit and waits outside the church, hoping Lois will realise that he still wants to marry her.

She comes, they talk about his insecurities in trying to deal with a life without powers, and they reaffirm their love for each other.

After their wedding, Lois sends Martha and Jonathan to the room they had booked in Tulsa, and takes Clark to his bedroom in Smallville for their wedding night.

Their activities prove restorative, and the story ends with the return of Clark's powers.


Thanks to everyone who is still interested in this series despite the long delay.

Corrina.
Posted By: Darth Michael Re: FDK - So Many Questions (14/14) - 10/30/11 09:16 AM
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Their activities prove restorative, and the story ends with the return of Clark's powers.
Thanks so much for the awesome recap, Corrina! Of course, now I'm all spider for story #5!

Michael
Posted By: Loriel Eris Re: FDK - So Many Questions (14/14) - 11/08/11 12:58 PM
Just read all four of these stories over the course of the past couple of days. I absolutely loved them. They were such a delight to read!
Posted By: Female Hawk Re: FDK - So Many Questions (14/14) - 11/10/11 04:25 PM
Thanks for the note, Loriel, I'm glad you enjoyed the stories.

As for the next installment, it is coming together very, very slowly. I keep hoping for a breakthrough so it will begin to flow, but so far, huh as to when it might start appearing on the boards.

(And if anyone happens to see a stray male muse, could you smack him upside the head and send him back to me. mad )

Corrina.
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