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Clark sighed. "I want to remember," he said quietly.

Lois moved towards him, stopping when she was inches from him. She rested her hand on his chest. "Make love to me," she whispered. "Maybe that's what you need to jog your memory."

He gulped as she ran her hand down his chest, over his stomach, before sliding her arms around his waist. His arms automatically went around her. "I don't know," he whispered back. "Are you sure that's what you want? To be with me even if I don't remember? I care about you, I know that but..." His fingers brushed against her cheek.

Thanks!
Carol

ARGH! I'd thought for sure that the kiss would have brought it back, but they're still being tortured. How long can this go on?! And the preview is just evil. :p

Well, at least things didn't *seem* to get worse. It just makes me want to cry to see Lois hurting so much.

Memory or no memory, Clark need to take an action. They need to talk about trying to establish a new relationship until his memory returns. (if ever)

They know that they loved each other. They should jump at the chance to fall in love again. That might prove to be a gift instead of a curse.

Carol, I love this story even though I'm reading it through tears.

Bob

Journal, where is the journal?

Clark really should not need his memory to know that he is in love with Lois. But Carol--being the crafty one that she is--will torture us until the last line of chapter 16! If you didn't rock so much, I'd...I'd...I'd...

~Sheila

Breakin' my heart, Carol!

But ditto to Sheila...you still rock.

Great part,
JD

Awesome part, Carol. But I can't help but notice a certain blabbermouthiness in Clark. Seems to be a trademark, huh? The boy really needs to learn the meaning of perfect deniability. He could always respond with 'I don't remember'

And I sure hope Lana is going to take the second strike in stride, too.

Michael

PS: I guess Chad has become a permanent resident of Smallville, huh?

Boneheaded kids.

I'm kind of surprised Ellen hasn't been pushing for any more expert opinions of Clark's amnesia.

I'm amused to see Josh and Chad around.

So, either there's a quick resolution to this amnesia business, or you skip ahead in time a lot, or there is going to be a sequel. At least, that's my supposition, since there are only 3 parts left.

This is starting to get as heartbreaking as the early parts of OTOH...but you're going to let him remember soon, right?!? Please?

But it was a great part!

More soon please!
Amber

just keep swiming, just keep swiming lol. I'm sure Carol will help me out

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That was a terrible place to leave it!!

Other than that, it's a great story - really enjoyable. Lois is in a situation I guess a lot of girls have found themselves in - but, as usual with LnC, there's a twist, which just adds to the pain.

I'm looking forward to the next part.

Still following it and loving it... You know this is a unique story in that I can blame neither Lois nor Clark for the angst... looking fwd to next part!

Thanks guys!

More family drama ensuing... /sigh/

Karen - me evil? Couldn't be! You're thinking of someone else!

Bob - don't cry! More coming up!

Patrick - good question...

Sheila - would I do that? Seriously?

JD - [and Sheila] - I rock? Thanks

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Michael - yeah - he's been a bit of a blabbermouth a couple times lately. And yes, Chad's been around, and so is Chris Davis in another WiP!

Amy - I'll add it back in, but I think she's suggested it and the Kents have avoided it...

Amber - remember? Does he need to?

lovesuper - just keep swimming swimming swimming. What do we do we swim swim swim.

Female Hawk - glad you're enjoying it!

AnKS - you mean you don't blame me either?! Whew!

Coming soon to a boards near you: Chapter 14.

Carol

I thought it was cute to see Chad in the background along with Pete and Abby.

It's surprising and a little sad that Lois isn't trying to establish a married life with Clark. She misses the marriage she thought she would have, but she isn't putting out any effort to let Clark make decisions with her. On the other hand, Clark didn't seem too upset by it.

Elisabeth