FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 32 - 03/02/09 12:11 PM
Re: FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 32 - 03/02/09 02:25 PM
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Clark turned to see a look of disbelief cross Luthor’s features. He leaned in close to his nemesis. “No more kids, Luthor...”
Luthor looked at him, gulped, and nodded. A second truce was forged in their war.
Luthor looked at him, gulped, and nodded. A second truce was forged in their war.
Weee!!! GGGoH
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Cat rolled her eyes. “The man's a super-hero, Jimmy, not a dog.” She departed.
Jimmy looked apologetically to Clark. “I didn’t think she would manage to turn it on, CK...”
Clark scanned the area then said in a low voice. “Jay heard it at his house, Jimmy. So it has quite a range... but that hurt close up...”
<Your girlfriend wins though...>
<What?!>
<That whistle thing you do for taxis... It *hurts*!>
<Um... oops?>
Jimmy looked apologetically to Clark. “I didn’t think she would manage to turn it on, CK...”
Clark scanned the area then said in a low voice. “Jay heard it at his house, Jimmy. So it has quite a range... but that hurt close up...”
<Your girlfriend wins though...>
<What?!>
<That whistle thing you do for taxis... It *hurts*!>
<Um... oops?>
Liked the added Martha-stuff and I'm still saying they got off too easy on the two-rooms thing
/buckles in for an entertaining ride/
Michael
Re: FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 32 - 03/02/09 09:24 PM
Glad to see that Lois didn't humiliate herself in front of Martha and Jonathan this time (the fax, the cross-dressing cook.) Now I'm wondering how the whole Trask and kryptonite thing will play out.
Looking forward to more!
Looking forward to more!
Re: FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 32 - 03/02/09 11:21 PM
I like the truce aspect of the end of Smart Kids. Lex certainly believes that this Superman is no one to take lightly and that a threat may have very real consequences.
I like the fact that they go to Smallville looking for Trask. That connection was too obvious to miss.
I miss the "cross dresser" line although obviously it wouldn't work now. Same with the Fax comment. I was sort of wondering if Martha would be more forward with some kind of line or question along the lines of "Do you two still need separate rooms?" However, that wouldn't be realistic and it wouldn't be Martha. (But it would have been funny.) So I like your decisions on how to play Smallville day one. It fits well within the rest of your story arc.
Bob
I like the fact that they go to Smallville looking for Trask. That connection was too obvious to miss.
I miss the "cross dresser" line although obviously it wouldn't work now. Same with the Fax comment. I was sort of wondering if Martha would be more forward with some kind of line or question along the lines of "Do you two still need separate rooms?" However, that wouldn't be realistic and it wouldn't be Martha. (But it would have been funny.) So I like your decisions on how to play Smallville day one. It fits well within the rest of your story arc.
Bob
Re: FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 32 - 03/03/09 03:40 AM
Nice! loving the story and sorry for not leaving feedback more regularly.
So if and when Kryptonite rears its ugly head, are both of them going to be exposed? And if events are similar to that in GGGoH, we don't have Rachel with a gun, but there is a Sheriff Harris for rescuing, right?
Although, there's always Jay.
Looking fwd to next part.
So if and when Kryptonite rears its ugly head, are both of them going to be exposed? And if events are similar to that in GGGoH, we don't have Rachel with a gun, but there is a Sheriff Harris for rescuing, right?
Although, there's always Jay.Looking fwd to next part.
Re: FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 32 - 03/06/09 07:54 PM
Hi Lieta. So wheres the rest of the Both Sides of the Coin story.I'm very exciteded to read.
You said you would post it on Thursday and today is Friday...
TKS
You said you would post it on Thursday and today is Friday...
TKS
Re: FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 32 - 03/09/09 11:17 AM
Ok, finally caught up with this.
WOW!
WOW!!!
I'm really liking this story. Looking forward to more soon.
I do like that Clark doesn't back down to Luthor.
However, Luthor does seem to be a bit of a wuss...
James
WOW!
WOW!!!I'm really liking this story. Looking forward to more soon.
I do like that Clark doesn't back down to Luthor.
However, Luthor does seem to be a bit of a wuss...
James
Re: FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 32 - 03/16/09 12:55 PM
I still very much enjoy this story and hope for the next parts soon!
Re: FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 32 - 03/17/09 02:12 PM
MORE SOON PLEASE!!!!
James
James
Re: FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 32 - 03/27/09 07:52 AM
Hi Lieta,
It suddenly struck me that I haven't read Both Sides of the Coin in a while
Missing my regular dosage
It suddenly struck me that I haven't read Both Sides of the Coin in a while
Missing my regular dosage
Re: FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 32 - 04/15/09 06:40 AM
Just bringing this back up to the top....
Where did this story go????
I wanna know what happens next!!!
Where did this story go????
I wanna know what happens next!!!
Re: FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 32 - 04/15/09 09:15 AM
Lieta seems to have disappeared sometime around March 4 or so. I got a note from her about a story idea on March 3 and haven't heard from her since.
I have tried both private messages and email but there has been no reply to either.
Bob
I have tried both private messages and email but there has been no reply to either.
Bob
Re: FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 32 - 04/15/09 11:48 AM
Yeah, the last to-be-BRed-bit I got was an March 5th
Michael
Michael
Re: FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 32 - 04/16/09 02:34 PM
I hope Lieta will get back to us
Her story is really great
Her story is really great
Re: FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 32 - 04/16/09 03:02 PM
Michael, couldn't you supply us with a fix or two? Even privately? 
Re: FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 32 - 04/16/09 07:34 PM
I heard from Lieta today. 
She has had a number of crazy/distracting/??? real life issues but she is planning on being back before too much longer and "Coin" will continue.
Bob
She has had a number of crazy/distracting/??? real life issues but she is planning on being back before too much longer and "Coin" will continue.
Bob
Re: FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 32 - 04/16/09 07:59 PM
I'm glad. I've missed this story.
Re: FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 32 - 04/16/09 09:53 PM
super duper!
Re: FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 32 - 04/17/09 01:18 AM
Yes Yes yes!!!
Re: FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 32 - 04/19/09 02:10 PM
So great to hear she's back from being MIA
As for the fix-bit: I don't believe giving the next part or two away before she's ready to post would be a good idea
Michael
As for the fix-bit: I don't believe giving the next part or two away before she's ready to post would be a good idea
Michael
Re: FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 32 - 06/17/09 10:57 AM
/bump/
scnr
Michael
scnr
Michael
Re: FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 32 - 06/17/09 12:42 PM
Heh.. >.< I'm currently re-reading Coin myself to see if there's any edits to be made before resuming posting... But I am here!