FDK - Ficathon- when You Wish Upon a Star - Lois & Clark Fanfic Message Boards

Oh sooooo dang sweet!!! Loved the whole thing. The party. The crappy food. The awful punch. Loved your Lois in this!

Bravo! *hurries to post this in case someone else is already doing a fdk thread*

Hehe! This is so cute!!

Lois just cracks me up at the beginning.

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For half a second, she contemplated pouring the contents of her glass right back into the bowl, but she had a funny feeling she'd get caught doing it, and she was in no mood to endure a lecture about etiquette or hygiene.

LOL! I can totally see her doing that, too.

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"Yeah, of course you do," Lois replied, patting him on the arm affectionately. "I forget you believe in magic..."

*Giggle* One of the reasons I absolutely adore Clark.

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"No, I suppose we won't," Lois replied shrugging, as the doors closed on a very confused Jimmy.

Very cute....

And ironic that you wrote this fic for Dandello with no Bat.... when hers had Bruce as an instigator, =P

This is a beautiful holiday story.

It captures the very essence of an office party.

Bob

Yep, that was very cute indeed!

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For half a second, she contemplated pouring the contents of her glass right back into the bowl, but she had a funny feeling she'd get caught doing it, and she was in no mood to endure a lecture about etiquette or hygiene.

*snort* (But you know what? There have been many fics where Lois hasn't been able to be around anything alcoholic without getting totally plastered, so I find it a refreshing change that she wants to pour her punch right back into the bowl!)

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"Hey, look, a shooting star!" came Clark's voice from right behind her.

You know what? When I read that, I thought that Clark had taken off into outer space to fix a few shooting stars for Lois. It wouldn't be too hard. Find some pieces of meteorite, quite small ones, and aim them at Metropolis. They will burn up beautifully in the atmosphere and turn into great shooting stars!

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"You know... Sometimes I think you spend too much of your time around Superman. He's rubbing off on--" Lois paused abruptly, frowned, then went on, "Or is it the other way around and you're rubbing off on him? You guys are starting to sound more and more alike..."

Galactically stupid Lois... :rolleyes:

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"Hey, guys," he called out, waving at them with a hand, "I just found out something really big! You'll never guess who the new anchor for the WGBS evening news is going to be!"

Just then, the elevator bell dinged and its doors opened. Lois abruptly pushed Clark inside.

"No, I suppose we won't," Lois replied shrugging, as the doors closed on a very confused Jimmy.

Ann

Very, very cute - but where is Batman? I didn't even find a reference. (Unless you mean Lois' distaste for the hors d'oeuvre which is mirrored in the fanifc "Meet Sam Wayne" by Bruce himself...)

Well, at least - didn't I spot a little comic reference? Hmmm?

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"Hey, guys," he called out, waving at them with a hand, "I just found out something really big! You'll never guess who the new anchor for the WGBS evening news is going to be!"

Let me guess (according to the comics of old): Clark Kent!

Let's just hope he'll find out before he's too late on the job.

/me crawls back into comic geek corner

I wish there was a Graemlin that stood for melting into a pile of goo, but since there isn't I'm letting you know that I am. Soo.. cute!

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"I wonder how many times people have mistaken Superman for a star and made a wish," he said wistfully.

This line is prefectly Clark. His concern for others and their needs and wants.

Very sweet. Nice to wake up to.

Aww...that was so sweet!

~Sheila

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It was a shy, tentative kiss, which was over almost as soon as it had begun.

Pulling back, Clark smiled and said, "See, sometimes wishes come true..."

"This was-- this was your wish?" Lois asked in a small voice, a clearly surprised expression in her eyes.

"Mine?" he replied, a hint of a teasing smile on his lips, "I thought it was yours."

Lovely fic, Lara, and lovely to see you posting a story again!

Yet another gem from you Lara... where do they keep coming from?

It was nice, simple, cute.. and has GREAT potential for a sequel.

And just because...
"oh where, oh where.... is the BATMAN?"

Hi Lara!

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Set in S2. (eg: pre-revelation)

/does NOT peek at the end/ Wonder if there will be a revelation. And Batman

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For half a second, she contemplated pouring the contents of her glass right back into the bowl, but she had a funny feeling she'd get caught doing it, and she was in no mood to endure a lecture about etiquette or hygiene.

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He'd had to run off someplace, about a half hour ago.

Superman doing a New Year’s thing for the city?

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Lois might have taken this opportunity to leave, but part of her just couldn't abandon him; the fact that he wasn't even around notwithstanding. He'd be back eventually - he always came back - and Lois knew that, if she went home now, Clark would be sad to see that she'd left before he returned.

Awwwwww

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...and possibly plot her revenge.

/chokes/

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"You know... Sometimes I think you spend too much of your time around Superman. He's rubbing off on--" Lois paused abruptly, frowned, then went on, "Or is it the other way around and you're rubbing off on him? You guys are starting to sound more and more alike..."

/chokes again/

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Just a moment later, they were standing in front of the elevator, hoping to make as quick a getaway as possible, when out of nowhere came Jimmy Olsen.

Entrance: Jimmy Interruptus.

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"Hey, guys," he called out, waving at them with a hand, "I just found out something really big! You'll never guess who the new anchor for the WGBS evening news is going to be!"

Vicky Vale?

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"Yes, and unless you have a stomach of steel - which we both know isn't the case - you really don't want to eat any of that food, Clark. Trust me," Lois insisted.

Hmm...

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Lois looked up, squinting, before finally saying, "That's not a star. It's probably just Superman..."

Clark bit back a chuckle. "I'm pretty sure it's a star, Lois."

Inside knowledge, huh?

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Lois shrugged. "With my luck? You bet I check under the bed! Not that I expect to find anything... But monsters – the kind we help send to jail, anyway – tend to like stalking me, so I'm just being...careful."

Great and sweet fic, Lara. And look, I even managed to leave FDK now, instead of in two months, like with “It Happened All Night”

Michael

I was hoping for more Jimmy - oh well. Very cute story.

I'd quote my fave parts, but everyone else already did!

Loved this!

Carol

Perfect, absolutely perfect. sigh......

Whoa! Can I just stand in awe for a little bit? Because I wasn't expecting to get anywhere near this much feedback so quickly.

/is blown away!

Thank you!!!

@Dandello: I know you probably wanted more of Jimmy... I tried, but I just never managed to write him so he sounded anything even remotely close to Jimmy at all, so I settled for this and not posting the story several days late while I tried to turn the whiny kid I had into a reasonable facsimile of Jimmy Olsen. Sorry!

@Jessi: I do still write Lois! Sometimes. ..except of course it's Smallville's Lois. Too bad I can't mix and match, cause I like OUR Clark better than theirs.

@Ann: Yeah, you're right, it's probably not a star, but another piece of Nightfall - or better, a piece of Krypton. *giggles* If this had been set in S1, I think I would probably have tried to slip something about that in there, but... well... Sweet pic, btw - thanks for posting!

@LaraJK: There are two sorta kinda nods to the comics, with WGBS and Fifth Street. But I tried to stick to actual show canon for everything else. And I honestly wasn't thinking of Clark for the new news anchor. LOL! I was thinking of someone else, but it's just a detail that's not very important.

@Lisamaree: Sorry, my dance card is full already, and there won't be a sequel. Do feel free to write one, if you feel like it, though. You, or anyone else.

@Michael: Way to go on speed. *giggles* Vicky Vale is actually an interesting guess - but she's more of a photographer. Besides, I was really trying not to bring in any of the Bat-clan in this one.

@Carol (& Elisabeth as well): Thank you for putting this ficathon together! Wasn't easy coming up with a fic after so long, but it was fun, too. Thanks for that.

@bellarata, Lieta, bobbart, crazy_babe, cp33, Sheila, Lisa (*hugs*!), robinson: Thank you so, so much for the comments! I appreciate them more than you know.

...and as for all of you asking about Batman: Well, see... in memory of his passing, I figured it would be appropriate of me to offer you all a "fic of silence."

[what? you don't believe me? oh come on! seriously... can't y'all see I'm mourning?]

Lara, thanks so much for your note of appreciation. It's actually me who should be thanking you. That was an awesome story, a blessing to us all.

I thought it was sweet of Lois to go to and stick around at the party just because Clark invited her. I thought it was neat that they spent the evening alone instead. I was glad the Chinese restaurant wasn't Ralph's Pagoda, enjoyed the walk back to Lois' place, giggled at the thought of Lois checking for monsters under her bed, sighed at the extra opportunity for them to wish upon the star, and thought it was so sweet that Clark tried to "guess" what she wished for. It was such an enjoyable read.

Elisabeth
PS The punch is rarely alcoholic at the office parties I've attended. Usually, if there is alcohol it will be wine served at dinner or it will be served at a bar by a bartender. It would rarely be self-served punch.

Oh I LOVED this. So romantic sigh...
I sort of felt like Olive Oil when she melts from Popeye's kiss<g> You haven't lost your touch. I wish you a happy healthy New Year and may Batman fly through your window. Laura

@Elisabeth: aww! thank you!

I'm really glad I caved when you asked if I would participate. In that way, you certainly deserve credit for this story being posted. About the punch - it wasn't alcoholic, though it's not mentioned. There was a line originally, about it "thankfully not being spiked yet", but I deleted it.

@Laura: thank you so much! *hugs* ...I wish Batman would come in my living-room through the window, too. LOL! I'll settle for him in my head for now, I guess.

Thanks again to everyone for the wonderful feedback - you guys all rock! *big, big hugs to all*

Lara, it's great to see you back with a new fic.

Your stories are always a wonderful reading, with humor and WAFFY in the right proportion.

Lara, I hope to see new stories of yours. I've been missing your work.

Good authors are unforgettable. Thank you for coming back with this WAFFy piece. It's the kind of story that makes me feel good and puts a smile on my face. [Linked Image]

Andreia

This was so sweet and the ending was completely unexpected. I was waiting for Clark to offer to check under her bed for monsters or something, but I like your ending so much better.

@Andreia - thank you so much for the sweet comments! ...made me a little bit sniffly, even. *hugs you*

I'm glad I wrote this for the ficathon, but I'm not sure that this means I'll be back again often. I'm sorrrrryyyy! ...just that my heart (and brain, it seems) has been stolen by another superhero, lately. And, NO, it's not Batman. (seriously, it's not Batman!)

@anonpip - *giggles* I hadn't even thought of having Clark check for monsters under her bed! But, hey, maybe she invites him up and he does? Could be, huh? Thanks for the comments!!