FDK-Through the Window Part 5 - Lois & Clark Fanfic Message Boards

yay!!!

Well, I really, really liked the scene with Jimmy and Clark in the car.

And the scene with Clark and Jonathan has to be one of the most poignant I've read.

Not to mention a waffy, wonderful reunion.

I think I'm sorry it's come to an end though.

Course there's plenty of scope for a...sequel. <insert whistling innocently icon here>

Wonderful, CC! What an amazingly powerful story you've woven. I loved it.

LabRat

Wonderful story!!! I definitely agree with Labrat about a sequel, too.

Absolutely delightful, CC. You've managed to floor me again, with this conclusion to your latest story, and its result never ceases to amaze me at how fantastic of a writer you are. The scene between Lois and AltClark was fantastic.

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“And if I stayed? If maybe… she went… to balance the cosmic scales… or whatever?”

I can't wait to read your next fanfiction, and I hope it will be -- well I know it will be, so I'm not worried at all

-- as amazing and poignant as all the others you've written.

-Jo

P.S. As soon as I saw the first three parts on the boards, the day I was leaving to go to my family's place for Thanksgiving, I knew I had to print it, and catch up on the way there so that I could give you feedback upon my arrival.

P.P.S. Do you have a website with your fanfiction on it? I'd really like to read them all, as I'm sure that I'm missing out on several incredible fanfics.

Hi,

Beautiful!

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“Do you know how many deals I made with God, Lois? How I have begged and bargained over the months? Just bring her back. If she’s sick or injured or amnesia- stricken and will never remember me, I’ll take her. If she’s been held captive and…forced,” he faltered, cleared his throat. “Comes home with a child, two children, twenty, I’ll take her.” He turned her face towards his slowly, wanting her to see him. “Anyway, anyhow, anytime, anyplace. I just…want…her…back.”

“My biggest regret,” Lois replied. “Was that I was taken before I could tell you I loved you. That night, the night Tempus came…I would have. I didn’t think I would ever be able to say it to your face… just to your memory.”

Love this part.

Great Nfic Epilogue.

MAF

Wow

great ending CC!

I will comment on your -AHEM- epilogue (

) in the nFic folder but this last part was too good to go unnoticed.

The parting scene was so sweet and sad, and then

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“ThankyouGodThankyouGodThankyouGod…”

OMG!

And this too..

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And that is how Clark Kent, a visitor to his own universe, found himself living the dream that had sustained him. He was lying beside Lois Lane, a visitor to another universe and back again, and listening to her gentle breathing and feeling her soft warmth against him. Knowing in his heart, that finally, all was right…in both worlds.

*sigh*

Too good, you spoil us!!

Thanks for a great story!

~Liz

To Jose, Labrat, Emily, Jo, Maria, and Liz- a thousand thank yous!

Thank you for following this all the way through, and for all of your thoughtful comments. I so appreciate it.

I had a lot of fun with this story, despite being tortured throughout by the evil Wendy Richards. (another story for another thread)

And I'm so glad you guys came along.

Jo, this is only my 4th story ever. Thank you, though, for your sweet, and huge compliments. If I try this again, I'll be looking for your thoughts.

Thanks again, CC

This is the saddest thing that I have ever read in my entire life.
This is the saddest thing that I have ever read.
This is the saddest thing. Period.

I cried. I actually cried. If this had actually happened on the show, I think I would have never turned on a television set again. I'm glad I read it now, because if I had had to wait for chapters, I would've just...I don't know. I feel like Clark described in the last chapter...not angry, not sad, just there. FOLCs know that Lois and Clark feel like real people, so to have them suffer like this, even for five chapters, is just so heartbreaking.

But all that being said, CC, you are an amazing writer. Thank you for sharing.