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FDK-Unfinished Business 10/? #9864 01/18/04 03:30 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast daneel OP Kerth
OP daneel Kerth Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast	Okay, nice cliffhanger!! :p Jose (More!! ) "Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot

Re: FDK-Unfinished Business 10/? #9865 01/18/04 04:30 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,999 The edge of civilization, Minn... T Tank Merriwether
Tank Merriwether T Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,999 The edge of civilization, Minn...	Good instalment. Nice bouts of introspection with both our primarys. This Lois immpersonator seems a little sharper than the one who showed up on the series. Will they actually talk? Will Clark/Superman believe Lois when she tells him that it wasn't her at the rally? Will the gentle readers string up the gentle writer if she doesn't follow this up quickly enough? Good cliff hanger, but only if it is followed up by the next part reasonably quickly. Tank (who always wondered why Clark wouldn't believe Lois in the show given what he knew about her feelings for Superman)

Re: FDK-Unfinished Business 10/? #9866 01/18/04 05:15 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,454 London (the one in Ontario, Ca... Wendymr Pulitzer
Wendymr Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,454 London (the one in Ontario, Ca...	Sorry I haven't posted on the last couple of instalments, Sara, but I'm still reading this and still enjoying it very much indeed. Poor Clark! I know you wanted me to say that Clark deserved all he got in this story, but I can't help but feel sorry for him, especially after what he thinks Lois thinks of him. Though now, like it or not, Lois and Superman are face to face. So I assume Clark will find out that Lois wasn't the one badmouthing him? Lots of lovely angst... keep it coming, but let them talk soon!! Wendy Just a fly-by! waves

Re: FDK-Unfinished Business 10/? #9867 01/18/04 10:46 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. Pulitzer
mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Great part. You are Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

Re: FDK-Unfinished Business 10/? #9868 01/18/04 11:10 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 767 usa merry Features Writer
merry Features Writer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 767 usa	Sara, great part I hate cliffhangers merry

Re: FDK-Unfinished Business 10/? #9869 01/18/04 11:47 AM
Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 370 J Julia Beat Reporter
Julia Beat Reporter J Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 370	OMG, what happened? And even more important, what's going to happen now? Quote He had behaved completely differently in both guises. He had been clever. He had been smart. He had been deceitful. He had been dishonest. He had lied. Just wanted to let you know that I loved this line. Don't know exactly why, but it somehow touched me. Post more, very soon, please Julia

Re: FDK-Unfinished Business 10/? #9870 01/18/04 06:03 PM
Joined: Aug 2003 Posts: 57 Canada Jocelyn Brant Freelance Reporter
Jocelyn Brant Freelance Reporter Joined: Aug 2003 Posts: 57 Canada	Quote “Remember a couple of years back, when I did some research into our family tree and discovered that our great-great-grandmother died from a fatal infection called endocarditis? Inflammation of the heart?” “Yeah?” “I think I have it.” Lois wound the phone cord round and round her finger. That was sappy, but it came closest to describing what she felt. This was awesome! I loved this part so much, I had to quote it back. I haven't quoted back anything in a while, but this seemed completely necessary. This was an awesome part, and I'm very anxious to read the next part where Clark and Lois finally talk (or at least they had better talk). Waiting in high-strung anticipation, Jo

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