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#88965 08/15/12 09:34 PM
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Welcome back Nan!

Things are still on track. Lois' rescuer is looking more and morr like an Indian shaman.

Looking forward to the next chapter.


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can't wait to find out more about Lois's rescuer!

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Your ears must be burning, Nan. Michael and I just mentioned the Vampire Murders (and how Lex was the vampire, just joking) in another FDK thread.

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Lois shrugged. "We're talking about Intergang here. Remember what you said happened when you guys were investigating Lex last year. Henderson didn't tell anybody but the people he trusted 'cause he didn't know who might be on Lex's payroll. How do we know Intergang doesn't have plants in the police department?"
Because if we did that I wouldn't get to see Superman. Duh!

I like her answer there actually. That makes lots of sense. thumbsup

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"What do you suppose that secret door in the closet was for?" Lois said.
Mean game of Hide and Seek? Cheating spouses?

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"Good question. My guess would be to move stuff from one side to the other without going outside."
Or that.

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"Probably. I wonder who rented the house last summer."

"We can find out," Clark said. "Or, rather, Jimmy can find out for us."
LOIS: Yeah, let's have Jimmy do the grunt work instead of us.

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That, when they were involved in a complicated investigation, usually meant they were going to be doing something outrageous before long, Clark knew, but he said nothing. Lois wasn't going to change her mind just because he raised objections. He wondered, sometimes, why it was that most of the important women in his life tended to be Type A personalities. It just figured that Superman preferred high-maintenance women, of which Lois was a shining example. It was probably just as well that she didn't have super powers. He would never have been able to keep up with her. He barely managed as it was.
I love how "Superman perferred high-maintenance women". Clark couldn't possbily have ANYTHING to do with them, though. thumbsup

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Henderson pulled his thoughts from the flight and back to business. "I take it Lois's rescuer doesn't want to be seen in public?"
Daylight actually.

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"I know. But he's in here -- or he was when Lois and Clark talked to him." Superman's voice was also lowered. "This way."
I just thought of something obvious. It must be nice for Clark to not have to tell Superman stuff; it really saves time not repeating messages and things (i.e. see Lois in Perry's office) to Superman directly.

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The man's full lips twitched at the corners. "You may call me a friend.
Hey, isn't that what Superman first called himself as well. He IS Kryptonian.

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"A vessel waits off shore," the man told him. "It sails beneath the surface of the sea, and its cargo is death."
Submarine. Cool. Death = guns and drugs. Or is there something else lethal in there? Plague, perhaps?

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"You say they're waiting for me to remove my men?" he asked the mystery man.

"Of course. They fear discovery."
I wonder how Henderson will be able to pull back his men without it appearing to be a trap?

HENDERSON: Okay, men, fall back, but naturally. Casual, like.

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I leave the remainder to you, as you are the guardian of this place in this time."
Sounds like the Rescuer is from another time and place.

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"There will not be another until your men are withdrawn," the other said. "These men have limited fuel, however. If they cannot make their delivery soon, it may be weeks before they return."
So, time is of the essence.

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"I figured that part," Henderson said. "What I don't understand is how you're mixed up in this."
I didn't have a choice. Someone opened up my grave and woke me up.

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"Good evening, Inspector Henderson," he said. "And my wishes for good fortune go with you. Please tell Miss Lane that I hope she will suffer no ill effects from her adventure last night."
Did they tell this guy about Lois's vampire visitor?

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here was the faintest fluttering sound behind him and he glanced back, wondering if a bird had been somehow trapped in the building,
Big mosquitos. Oh, wait, winter. Nevermind.

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but now there was no one and nothing there.
Between this and the vampire from the night before, Henderson will be seeking the services of Dr. Friskin soon to stop the nightmares.

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Lois's mysterious rescuer had vanished as if he had never existed.
shock He's not a bat, is he?


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Ah! Another chapter of this spine-tingling thriller. Thank you, Nan.

It seems to me that we're not quite close enough to the end to see the pattern yet. Who is this guy with the great teeth? I don't think he's a vampire, but he's certainly someone or something out of the ordinary. And because he described Bill Henderson as a protector in this time and seemed to compare Bill to himself, we now have to wonder if he's the anti-Tempus in this piece, a Paladin galloping through time and space to right the wrongs he sees around him. Or, maybe he's from another planet and is doing the same things Clark does, albeit in a different way.

Then again, maybe he's a Fed with excellent dental health and overly precise enunciation.

It will be interesting when Clark goes up against one of these (apparent) vampires. We'll see who's more powerful then.

And, if this happens, we have the prospect of a Great Reveal! Will Lois learn the secret in time to help Clark defeat the bad guy? Or will he share it with her just before all whatever breaks loose? Even less likely to my mind - but still possible - Lois and Clark defeat these specters of the night without The Great Reveal! (Insert echo effect here.) And what part will Bill Henderson play, and will it be a solo or a duet with Perry White?

Good story, Nan. My only complaint is that the last few chapters were too short. Or did they just grip my attention so hard that they only felt that way? Doesn't matter. I only hope that whatever held this chapter back won't afflict you again.

Looking forward to the next chapter with worms on my tongue (baited [or bated] breath).


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It seems as if the "vampire" is a good guy. Interesting that he becomes more solid as the sun sets. I'm sure that's significant.

Terry already asked all the questions I had, so all I can say is, Please post more soon.

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Hi Nan! smile1
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"Why didn't you ask the guy at the Precinct to get a message to Henderson?"

Lois shrugged. "We're talking about Intergang here.
Sounds prudent.

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If Lois weren't with him, he'd take the stairs but Lois wasn't likely to go for walking from the underground lot up four flights of steps to the newsroom after all the running around they had been doing all day.
He *could* step out for a moment, Superman shows up, whisks Lois up the stairs and a minute later Clark huffs and puffs through the door?

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He wondered, sometimes, why it was that most of the important women in his life tended to be Type A personalities.
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