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#84876 02/15/12 10:17 AM
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Cute little vignette. I love that Superman / Clark has this little power play over the woman he loves and continues it even when letting her interview Superman would have given him more face time with her. thumbsup

But................

clap Thanks for the laugh .


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#84878 02/15/12 11:38 AM
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Haha! I like that Clark ignored Lois a little as Superman. I love that little tidbit of info at the bottom about the president. It's def. a Lois Lane move, FOR SURE!

Great job!


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#84879 02/16/12 02:25 AM
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Cute and I loved learning about the real reporter. I looked her up. I wonder if that is who they shaped Lois Lane after.


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#84880 02/16/12 05:47 AM
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Personally I think that Lois flashed back to the time she arrived at the Apollo to pick up her rookie partner and he ansewered the door wearing only a towel. She got a good look at his naked chest at that time. dance


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It has been a long time since I read this. I vividly remembered the revealing swim scene, but I had forgotten about the revelation part. I'm glad I reread the story today; most enjoyable. smile

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Clark pursed his lips and turned to his computer. He thought to himself, ‘In your dreams, Lois. In your dreams.’
Not the best way to handle Lois, Clark.

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She’d found that following him to crime or accident scenes, or, indeed, to any place he did a rescue was *not* going to net her the interview she wanted.
Ah, but how to use the element of surprise on a man who can hear your heartbeat?

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Amazingly, she had not gotten herself into trouble once.
How very un-Lois-like! eek

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Flirting with him never elicited any reaction, either, and she’d begun to think the man might be a eunuch or something.
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Fabulous little tale, and I love the spin on an actual, historial pretext. Wonderful!


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#84883 02/18/12 03:35 PM
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Too funny! I liked this story- especially the last point about the President skinny dipping. rotflol It was way too funny!


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#84884 02/20/12 02:31 PM
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Thanks everybody!


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#84885 02/25/12 12:10 PM
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You've done it again! dance

Helene and I just loved it xx

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Lois, naturally, is furious and decides to do whatever it takes to get the story.
Oh boy.

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How! I’ve been following him everywhere, sometimes even when you aren’t around, and, yet, he still gives you the story!”
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“I *will* get an interview from him! You just watch!”
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