Lois & Clark Fanfic Message Boards
Previous Thread
Next Thread
Print Thread
#84539 01/24/12 05:51 PM
Joined: Jan 2007
Posts: 921
A
anonpip Offline OP
Features Writer
OP Offline
Features Writer
A
Joined: Jan 2007
Posts: 921
Come one, come all! Feel free to leave comments, complaints, whatever...

#84540 01/25/12 07:44 AM
Joined: Feb 2010
Posts: 4,424
Likes: 1
L
Pulitzer
Offline
Pulitzer
L
Joined: Feb 2010
Posts: 4,424
Likes: 1
*Happy sigh*. Thank you for giving me my daily supply of WAFF. smile

I very much enjoyed this story. thumbsup

Joy,
Lynn

#84541 01/25/12 10:17 AM
Joined: Jul 2010
Posts: 3,883
Pulitzer
Offline
Pulitzer
Joined: Jul 2010
Posts: 3,883
I very much enjoyed the Clark POV throughout. So many times authors will jump from one to the other. smile


Herb replied, “My boy, I never say … impossible.” "Lois and Clarks"

My stories can be found here

kj
#84542 01/25/12 10:33 AM
Joined: Jun 2011
Posts: 2,131
Kerth
Offline
Kerth
Joined: Jun 2011
Posts: 2,131
thumbsup


Nothing spoils a good story like the arrival of an eye witness.
--Mark Twain
#84543 01/25/12 01:06 PM
Joined: Jan 2007
Posts: 1,069
BJ Offline
Top Banana
Offline
Top Banana
Joined: Jan 2007
Posts: 1,069
Awww! /sniffles. That was just lovely. I also enjoyed the POV and I liked the scenes from year to year, showing us a few of the ups and downs they enjo...erm, endure.... ah, experienced through the years. Thanks for sharing.

B

#84544 01/25/12 04:04 PM
Joined: Apr 2003
Posts: 4,058
Pulitzer
Offline
Pulitzer
Joined: Apr 2003
Posts: 4,058
I really loved that little bit of sweetness. Beautiful. Sigh... Laura


Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”

Caroline's "Stardust"
#84545 01/25/12 04:12 PM
Joined: Apr 2010
Posts: 3,763
Likes: 18
Pulitzer
Offline
Pulitzer
Joined: Apr 2010
Posts: 3,763
Likes: 18
What a gentle passage throught the years with Lois and Clark. I especially liked the 'floating' at the end. (Sigh!)


Morgana

A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.
#84546 01/25/12 07:59 PM
Joined: Jan 2011
Posts: 966
Features Writer
Offline
Features Writer
Joined: Jan 2011
Posts: 966
Wonderful story that really captures the essence of Clark and his multi-faceted yet single-minded love for Lois. Love the scenes chosen to showcase his/their journey.

Thanks for sharing!

#84547 01/27/12 04:25 PM
Joined: Jan 2007
Posts: 921
A
anonpip Offline OP
Features Writer
OP Offline
Features Writer
A
Joined: Jan 2007
Posts: 921
Thank you all! It was harder than I had expected to try to write something after so long, so it's good to hear kind words.

I much appreciate the feedback.

#84548 01/28/12 06:51 AM
Joined: Apr 2007
Posts: 9,059
Likes: 30
Boards Chief Administrator
Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Online Content
Boards Chief Administrator
Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Joined: Apr 2007
Posts: 9,059
Likes: 30
Hi Nancy!
I’m sorry I missed it on the beta wagon. frown Even had just re-read My Partner during Kerth prepping. Alas, available time and all that…

Quote
This interview wasn’t going that well, and getting flummoxed over a beautiful woman wasn’t going to help things.
/gets all sorts of ideas of Clark asking ‘Mr. White’ for permission to date said woman-cum-adopted-daughter/

Quote
It couldn’t have gone any more poorly than my interview had.
You never know. She *might* have worn an emerald necklace.

Quote
I mean, she did own a sweatshirt and I imagined she hadn’t bought it simply to fool me. She probably didn’t walk around her apartment alone wearing the dresses she wore to work.
Now, wouldn’t *that* be a twist?

Quote
I wasn’t sure Lois even knew I existed as anything more than an annoyance. To be fair, she didn’t seem to notice anyone else as people either.
wave Michael


Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!)

I go by Michael on the Archives.
#84549 01/30/12 04:22 PM
Joined: Jan 2007
Posts: 921
A
anonpip Offline OP
Features Writer
OP Offline
Features Writer
A
Joined: Jan 2007
Posts: 921
Thanks, Michael!

No problem on BRing. I'm on here so infrequently these days, I wasn't even sure who was still around. Glad to see you are!

Quote
Oooooooh! Nice plot-bunny!
Any ideas? I'd love to read more Michael-fic...

#84550 01/31/12 12:58 AM
Joined: Dec 2008
Posts: 2,181
Likes: 16
Kerth
Offline
Kerth
Joined: Dec 2008
Posts: 2,181
Likes: 16
All the sections were great and worked together wonderfully well to form a lovely story.

However, my favourite was 1995, and I would have enjoyed seeing exactly what Clark had 'misunderstood'. His reaction was so typically lunkheaded. I wonder how Lois dealt with him putting some distance between them. (I'm not saying you should have included this - but it got me thinking smile )

Thanks for sharing,

Corrina.

#84551 01/31/12 08:13 AM
Joined: Apr 2007
Posts: 9,059
Likes: 30
Boards Chief Administrator
Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Online Content
Boards Chief Administrator
Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Joined: Apr 2007
Posts: 9,059
Likes: 30
Quote
Any ideas? I'd love to read more Michael-fic...
blush Me, too eek On a serious note, I put it on my ideas-list, but so far it's just a cute bunny laugh

wave Michael


Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!)

I go by Michael on the Archives.
#84552 01/31/12 04:39 PM
Joined: Jan 2007
Posts: 921
A
anonpip Offline OP
Features Writer
OP Offline
Features Writer
A
Joined: Jan 2007
Posts: 921
Thanks, Corrina!

That's my favorite part, too. I'm sort of a sucker for despondent Clark.

I don't really know what Clark misunderstood. I took that from the script of We Have a Lot to Talk About. At some point Lois said that Clark misunderstood her.

Actually, I just checked the script again and I don't see it, so I don't know exactly where I got it from. I may have interpreted it from something else she said.

Anyway, my assumption is that Clark misunderstood her answer to his proposal. He took it as "No, I don't want to marry you," and what Lois meant was "No, I'm not ready to be engaged to you right at this moment, right after learning this big secret about you. I need some time to get used it, and then ask again."

So, that's what I was thinking when I wrote it.

And Michael - if that plot bunny turns into anything (or anything else materializes on your screen), please let me know!

#84553 02/05/12 05:15 AM
Joined: Apr 2007
Posts: 9,059
Likes: 30
Boards Chief Administrator
Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Online Content
Boards Chief Administrator
Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Joined: Apr 2007
Posts: 9,059
Likes: 30
blush

Michael


Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!)

I go by Michael on the Archives.

Moderated by  Kaylle, SuperBek 

Link Copied to Clipboard
Powered by UBB.threads™ PHP Forum Software 7.7.5