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I was so glad to see a new part. I think it is going along very well. I am exited to find out how LL and the real Kal El get along. I hope you have a few more chapters written to post soon. I love your stories but they take an extremely long time to read <g> More soon. Love it! Laura


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I really enjoyed reading LST years ago and always wondered about the other universe. When I first saw this come up I had to go back and re-read it all over again in fascination. I sat down and read as many chapters of it as I could and loved this one as well. I'm looking forward to seeing more!


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Thanks! I'm committed to working this story out and won't allow a long lapse again. It will be easier to write now that he's finally out and awake. Figuring out how to get him free was a challenge for me.

Now it's all angst and interpersonal relationships. YAY!


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Finally! Now I can get back to reading the rest of this amazing story. Glad to see you back L!!!!


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Yay! Another part!

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It was Kal-El, and he was in a state of complete undress.
Hubba hubba! (Oh wait. This is a serious situation. laugh )

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No matter how benign the two Clarks were, LL always feared reprisal for things that would have infuriated her one-time captor.
This is bad. It will certainly put a big strain on the relationship between LL and the true Kal-El. We know they should be soulmates - will that be impossible, as LL has been so damaged by Clone-El?

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A kind of warped version of sleeping beauty. She flushed at that. She was not the princess to wake him up. She was the evil witch, if anything.
Hee hee hee! In some ways, a very apt comparison.

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She often times found herself with a Kryptonian physician, trying not to give into the panic she felt at being in Kal-El's presence. After all, hadn't she watched him sleeping so many times after his assault on her? No – not his assault. The other's. And yet, he was identical to that man.
I think that LL will have more trouble getting over this than Lois did in "Long Strange Trip" . And in that story it took Lois well over a year to come to some sort of healing, which even now, isn't complete.

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This was Kal-El. He wasn't human like the Clarks.
Huge, huge point! The Clarks were brought up by humans - their nature is Kryptonian but their nurture is human. What difference will the Kryptonian upbringing make with Kal-El? I look forward to seeing you explore this.

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Update!
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Two Clark Kents. three Lois Lanes and one Herb Wells stood by Herb's dimension traveling machine and gazed at the craft's unconscious occupant.
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LL fought against her intrinsic terror. It was Kal-El, and he was in a state of complete undress.
Can something be sadly adorable? Or is that adorably sad?

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After a long moment of silence Clark looked over to Herb and broke the silence.
Right. Awkward moment, HGWells dropping a naked Ka-El in their laps.

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“They thought that 'Lord Kal' had discovered his existence and they decided to kill him to prevent being caught and punished for treason.”
Oops?

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A kind of warped version of sleeping beauty. She flushed at that. She was not the princess to wake him up. She was the evil witch, if anything.
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