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Nice set up. Bring it on! Sorry about posting in the wrong folder. I am looking forward to the rest. Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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I agree with Laura... This is definitely a good start to a story! I think you should continue it!
*Blayne*
Clark: You are really high maintenance, you know it?
Lois: But I'm worth it.
Clark: Not exactly what you had in mind, huh?
Lois: Let's see. So far I've been given a glimpse of ritual crop worship, been treated as your girlfriend, and insulted your parents. No, I couldn't have planned this.
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She still wasn't sure how she felt about him, or where they'd go from where they were now that she knew the secret, but she did know one thing… . Clark Jerome Kent *would* answer for what he had done. And she knew exactly how to go about it. Ooooooooooh, I cant wait to see THIS!!!! Great story!
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Great start! Keep it comin'! 
I've converted to lurk-ism... hopefully only temporary.
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Intriguing start, 'Penny' - I think you've definitely struck some interest here. In fact, if you don't continue, you're liable to get lynched!  Wendy 
Just a fly-by! *waves*
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LOL!!! 
"Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot
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Boards Chief Administrator Emeritus Nobel Peace Prize Winner
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Oh dear. Clark's in trouble again, I see. Well, I've loved 'Lois gets her revenge' fic since back in the days of BB Medos' vignettes <g>, so I really enjoyed this. Copying previous comments - can't wait to see what tortures she plans for our hapless hero. More please. LabRat
Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly.
Aramis: Yes, sorry.
Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal.
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Hi, Great start.
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
MAF
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hm. Interesting setup. I don't think I've seen one exactly like this, and you should continue.
Laura (who should be making felt right now)
“Rules only make sense if they are both kept and broken. Breaking the rule is one way of observing it.”
--Thomas Moore
"Keep an open mind, I always say. Drives sensible people mad, I know, but what did we ever get from sensible people? Not poetry or art or music, that's for sure."
--Charles de Lint, Someplace to Be Flying
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Hmm... good start I just hope Lois won't be too hard on Clark, 'cause he's hardly done anything to her ... at least, not compared to what he's gonna do in second season but I guess Lois wouldn't know that... so, um, anyway... here's hoping it all gets sorted out with a minimum of trauma. Pam "happy ending, now!" Jernigan
"You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed.
He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement."
"You can say that again," she told him.
"I have a...."
"Oh, shut up."
--Stardust, Caroline K
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Penny A good start! Please post the next part soon. Tricia 
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Aww, nice. I really want to see more soon! That's a good start for a story.
Julie
Mulder: Imagine if you could come back and take out five people who had caused you to suffer. Who would they be?
Scully: I only get five?
Mulder: I remembered your birthday this year, didn't I, Scully?
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Interesting teaser. Looking forward to Lois' machinations. Will she be confrontational? Will she be devious? Or will she just sit back and watch as Clark invariably stumbles his way to an eventual revelation? Stay tuned gentle readers for we all know that this wouldn't have been posted if the reluctant writer hadn't really wanted finish it.  Tank (who is wise to all those self-deprecating tricks)
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By all means, continue! I have to admit I was surprised to see that Lois was actually awake. Clark was focusing on her heartbeat, so why didn't he hear it suddenly accelerate when she got the shock of her life? Loved how she wanted CLARK and not Supes as she headed for his apartment. This Lois, at least, has her head on straight. Now we have to see what she's planning! Hazel, who wants MORE!
Lois: You know the deal.
Clark: Superman gets the guys in capes, Lois and Clark get the guys in suits.
-- Action Comics 827
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Penny
I'm in agreement with the others
great start - keep it coming
merry
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