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The end is in sight.

Comments here please.

Bob

Great job. I loved the ending with Martha and Lois. Laura

Oh wow, I loved this chapter! Poor Clark, I sure hope he wakes up soon. Hopefully Lois can get him some sun (can't remember if she's pushed for that yet, would have to go back and reread)

Can't wait to read the next part!

I love your story! Great job!

The last word of the following sentence, I think is a typo:
I think you probably mean "particles" instead of partials, at least it makes more sense to me, as the word "partials" always make me think of false teeth!!

Looking forward to how you wrap this up in the next few!!!

Yes, I did. Fixed now.

Thanks, EvelynC.

Bob

Oh wow, what an incredibly intense chapter! Poor Clark! Such major surgery may possibly leave him somewhat incapacitated, even if his powers return. I remember a story where Clark actually had one of his hands amputated, and it didn't grow back, as you can imagine. Hopefully Clark will recover in this fic!

Otherwise, as I said, it was a great chapter. I love the smart, determined Lois here. And the coversation between Lois and Martha was great.

Ann

Hi Bob,

Another brilliant chapter. It had me hooked right to the end.

Looking forward to more and seeing a certain "Boss" getting his just deserts.

All the best,

SNL

Another great chapter Bob! Love the way you're dealing with the Krptonite. It's exciting yet scary to think that Clark might not fully recover. It will be exciting to see how you develop this.

Love the potential love interest for Jimmy. (Now is this season 1 Jimmy or the other one?

Joan

Michael

Don't the Kents at least know of a sunlight connection to Clark's powers and possible thelp to his healing?? Perhaps not in this universe.

Can't wait for more of your story! Can't wait to see the StarLabs doctor on the scene!

Hi everyone. I had a good weekend and finished the rough draft of the final scene last night. I expect that the last three parts will come on a faster schedule than I've used so far.


Hi Laura:
Thanks. I love the Martha/Lois chemistry.


bellarase:
I didn’t think that was ever established in S1. In “Man of Steel Bars” there was a lot of speculation about the sun and Superman’s powers, but I thought even Clark didn’t know if there was a connection.


Hi Ann:
I’m glad you enjoyed the A-plot. That was one of my goals with this story. I felt like I had gotten into a B-plot rut and I wanted to see if I still know how to write A-plot. Me too!!


SNL:
The Boss is risking overplaying his hand. With all the things that Lex did, I was always surprised that he didn’t get caught sooner.


Joan:
I always use S2 – S4 Jimmy as my “reference” Jimmy Olsen. That is the case for all my stories even if like this one they are set in S1.


Michael:
Ummm… In the immortal words of Angelica Graynamore: I have no response to that.


EvelynC:
First, thank you again for the typo heads-up. Next, about this: As I said above, I don’t know of any place in S1 where the Kents or anyone else knew of a definitive connection between Superman’s powers and the sun. If you (or anyone else) know of a scene that establishes this connection (not speculates about it) then I’d love to know.


Thank you all,
Bob