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Ohhhh! Good part! What a way to start my day! The plot thickens. Yes, I'm looking forward to Lois - er, Linda - trying to kill Clark Kent. eek
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Great part! And the plot really does thicken!

Looking forward to how Lois will try (if she will) to kill Clark smile1

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Can I say it seemed completely in character for Clark to ask Lois to marry him? Even when he'd just meet her. He's so idealistic. He feels a connection and wants to protect her.

Poor Lois - what she's been through. I hope she hops on that plane with Clark.

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"Marry me."
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Interesting story.

I see a large speed bump ahead though, if things are actually they way the seem to be laid out.

If Lois is being forced to play the 'hitwoman' for these gun running thugs than she's in more trouble than she realizes.

Her situation would allow Clark to 'understand' and she'd be worthy of rescue... But they could never be together if Lois ever took a life not in self-defense. She doesn't even have the half legitimate excuse of working for the government (the 'good guys'?). The fact that she's being forced to do so is no excuse in the eyes of the law and morality. Murder is murder.

I'm looking forward to seeing what twist there might be to allow Lois and Clark to be together after they find a way to free Lois from her untenable situation.

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Hope you don't give up here, Mozartmaid. I'd like to see how this unfolds.

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Ohhhh! Good part! What a way to start my day!
Glad I got your interest and that you liked it! smile

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And the plot really does thicken!
Stay tuned cool

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Can I say it seemed completely in character for Clark to ask Lois to marry him? Even when he'd just meet her. He's so idealistic. He feels a connection and wants to protect her.
I'm glad that worked... the "Mr. & Mrs." will be explained as time goes on... but I couldn't resist Clark tossing that out there right away.

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but nooooo... he proposes [Laugh]
goofy Just go with it blush

Some of the rest of your questions will be answered in the following part... wink

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But they could never be together if Lois ever took a life not in self-defense. She doesn't even have the half legitimate excuse of working for the government (the 'good guys'?). The fact that she's being forced to do so is no excuse in the eyes of the law and morality. Murder is murder.
You're right... in real life I would whole-heartedly agree... I may have pushed the envelope a little on this story, putting these characters in this situation... but see where it goes... and you can tell me if I'm way off track...

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Hope you don't give up here, Mozartmaid. I'd like to see how this unfolds.
Nope, I won't! Next part will be up probably Tuesday, if not sooner!! hyper

Thanks for the interest and the FDK guys!! wave


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Originally posted by mozartmaid:
Nope, I won't! Next part will be up probably Tuesday, if not sooner!! hyper
hyper Reminds me of the old days, when I was eagerly awaiting Tuesdays because of the primetime shows laugh

Michael

PS: And although Update-Tuesday rocks, I am certainly not opposed to earlier posts blush


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