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FDK: A small trap (version 2) #76576 01/08/11 07:24 PM
Joined: Aug 2005 Posts: 5,797 T TOC OP Nobel Peace Prize Winner
OP TOC Nobel Peace Prize Winner T Joined: Aug 2005 Posts: 5,797	Good to see you back here, Rogue Chip! That was a very cute story. Laura was adorable. But poor girl, being outed on her very first rescue! Or at least, her secret was revealed by the kid whose cat she had rescued. Let's hope David wíll be loyal enough to keep his mouth shut. I certainly agree that a small kid like him would be only too happy to play detective like Batman and find out Supergirl's secret. It was fun to see how both David and Lois seemed to live comic book lives! Ann

Re: FDK: A small trap (version 2) #76577 01/09/11 06:24 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,945 Likes: 28 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,945 Likes: 28	Cute. I particularly grinned how Laura didn't think twice of leaving her block while dressed as Supergirl but followed her parents orders to the T about crossing the street when she was dressed as Laura. I'll admit, I kept expecting a familiar last name to be dropped for David, either one of their old enemies or maybe Henderson Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK: A small trap (version 2) #76578 01/09/11 03:13 PM
Joined: Dec 2005 Posts: 2,018 Portland, Oregon, USA F Framework4 Kerth
Framework4 Kerth F Joined: Dec 2005 Posts: 2,018 Portland, Oregon, USA	Delightful tale. Framework4

Re: FDK: A small trap (version 2) #76579 01/09/11 04:13 PM
Joined: Nov 2010 Posts: 1,685 Likes: 1 out in the cornfields S scifiJoan Merriwether
scifiJoan Merriwether S Joined: Nov 2010 Posts: 1,685 Likes: 1 out in the cornfields	Cute story. Love the references to Lois' cooking skills. Love Laura testing out her skills and her pride in her costume. I didn't see the earlier version of this story. I'm a little unclear as to why David suspected Laura and what lead him to set up his 'trap'. Nice job! Joan

Re: FDK: A small trap (version 2) #76580 01/12/11 10:51 AM
Joined: Aug 2005 Posts: 151 London, England SNL Hack from Nowheresville
SNL Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Aug 2005 Posts: 151 London, England	Lovely Story! Well Done and Well Written! Looking forward to further chapters / sequels. Regards, SNL

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