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FDK - The Wonder of Love - 9/15 #75050 11/03/10 05:01 PM
Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 3,145 Likes: 3 Southwest USA T Terry Leatherwood OP Pulitzer
OP Terry Leatherwood Pulitzer T Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 3,145 Likes: 3 Southwest USA	Comments are love, whether positive or negative. Life isn't a support system for writing. It's the other way around. - Stephen King, from On Writing

Re: FDK - The Wonder of Love - 9/15 #75051 11/04/10 07:41 PM
Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 342 Arkansas D Deja Vu Beat Reporter
Deja Vu Beat Reporter D Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 342 Arkansas	Quote Oh, good, thought Clark, the Superman groupie from hell has finally shown up. Mwahahahaha. Bewaaaaaaaaare! Quote “You’ll be great! In fact, you’ll be super!” “Don’t go there, okay?” This especially made me laugh. Quote Diana gave her money for both her ticket and her program to a tall, young Asian man who momentarily reminded her of Clark Kent. This was funny, too! I love the parallel they make in the show between the two. I think it was great that Jimmy almost saw Batman! Gotta wonder how easy it is to sneak around at the Daily Planet, though. There aren't any gargoyles to hang off of! I guess Jimmy's gonna get the package to Clarkent, who is going to go catch the tail-end of the battle between Lois and WW? Maybe? I'm excited!!! I'm looking forward to seeing how this plays out!

Re: FDK - The Wonder of Love - 9/15 #75052 11/04/10 08:34 PM
Joined: Jun 2010 Posts: 1,200 Boston, MA mozartmaid Top Banana
mozartmaid Top Banana Joined: Jun 2010 Posts: 1,200 Boston, MA	Another entertaining bit! Wondering what will happen next! Will someone spot WW with Lois?? How will Clark find out what's going on--or will he?? Looking forward to the next part! Reach for the moon, for even if you fail, you'll still land among the stars... and who knows? Maybe you'll meet Superman along the way.

Re: FDK - The Wonder of Love - 9/15 #75053 11/05/10 12:45 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,999 The edge of civilization, Minn... T Tank Merriwether
Tank Merriwether T Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,999 The edge of civilization, Minn...	While I've been enjoying this story so far, I've had a bit of a struggle (being a comic book guy) wrapping my head around your Wonder Woman. Casting her as the 'villian' is an interesting twist. And like all villians, they think their motivations are perfectly rational and justifiable to their logical ends. Still, it will be interesting to see how you will manage to 'level' the battleground between Lois and Diana. Tank (who says this Diana is very reminiscient of Maxima from the comics; a super powerful alien ruler who was searching for the perfect mate)

Re: FDK - The Wonder of Love - 9/15 #75054 11/06/10 04:18 PM
Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 3,145 Likes: 3 Southwest USA T Terry Leatherwood OP Pulitzer
OP Terry Leatherwood Pulitzer T Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 3,145 Likes: 3 Southwest USA	Ooh. More comments. Cool! Deja Vu, I hope you're still excited when you see what happens next. And thanks for picking out all those subtle humor lines, especially the one between Chen and Clark. It always puzzled me that Chen claimed to know Clark because they used the same optometrist when Clark's glasses are nothing more than camouflage. Maybe Chen knows "the secret," maybe he doesn't. Don't worry, Mozartmaid, Clark will find out - just not right away. Remember that package with the little black bat on it? Thanks for hanging with me, Tank. I'm not trying to portray Diana as evil, just consumed with ambition and willing to bend her principles to achieve her goal. And that's always a problem for anyone. Next chapter up in moments! Life isn't a support system for writing. It's the other way around. - Stephen King, from On Writing

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