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FDK - Aussie Rules (59/68) #74505 10/12/10 03:55 PM
Joined: Dec 2008 Posts: 2,122 Likes: 1 SW Vic, Australia Female Hawk OP Kerth
OP Female Hawk Kerth Joined: Dec 2008 Posts: 2,122 Likes: 1 SW Vic, Australia	Preview of 60 Quote From Clark's pocket, his cell rang. He slipped it out and saw the number displayed. "It's Mom," he said. He took a moment to steady himself before answering. "Hi, Mom." "Clark," she said with a note of urgency in her voice. "Have you heard the news?" His heart thudded low in his stomach. "What news?" "There are numerous gas leaks in Metropolis. One spark, and there will be a massive explosion. They're calling for Superman." "OK, Mom. Thanks." He hung up the phone. "Gas leaks," he told Lois with heavy regret. "I have to go." "Of course you have to go," she said quickly. "It will give me time to work out how we are going to fix this." He gave her a quick kiss and shot from her unit and towards Metropolis. FDK here. Thanks! Corrina.

Re: FDK - Aussie Rules (59/68) #74506 10/12/10 04:18 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 303 NY Joy Moony Beat Reporter
Joy Moony Beat Reporter Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 303 NY	wowowow-- evil cliffie!!! get back here and resolve----please?

Re: FDK - Aussie Rules (59/68) #74507 10/12/10 04:41 PM
Joined: Feb 2008 Posts: 2,823 IolantheAlias Pulitzer
IolantheAlias Pulitzer Joined: Feb 2008 Posts: 2,823	Quote "It explains Ultra Woman's complete dearth of anything resembling class." Oh, meow! Meow!

Re: FDK - Aussie Rules (59/68) #74508 10/12/10 05:38 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY Laurach Pulitzer
Laurach Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY	Oh you are evil. Get back here! Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?” Caroline's "Stardust"

Re: FDK - Aussie Rules (59/68) #74509 10/12/10 05:58 PM
Joined: Apr 2008 Posts: 377 USA S sarahg Beat Reporter
sarahg Beat Reporter S Joined: Apr 2008 Posts: 377 USA	so after last part - i was gonna stop reading until the last post was up, but of course, I couldn't resist. and it was worth it! ok, its getting sticky and my heart race increases with every semi-revelation, but loooooving it. especially since mayson doesn't have the green rock and luthor thinks she does and they'll both be caught. ok, enough rambling, post more!!!

Re: FDK - Aussie Rules (59/68) #74510 10/12/10 06:10 PM
Joined: Apr 2008 Posts: 397 bellarase Beat Reporter
bellarase Beat Reporter Joined: Apr 2008 Posts: 397	oh how awesome was this chapter? I really hate Mayson, LOL LOIS:I don't like you. MAYSON: Really? Oh god, that is such a relief - I don't like you either. LOIS: That makes me feel so much better

Re: FDK - Aussie Rules (59/68) #74511 10/12/10 06:40 PM
Joined: Feb 2007 Posts: 351 California EvelynC Beat Reporter
EvelynC Beat Reporter Joined: Feb 2007 Posts: 351 California	Whooooooeeeee!!! What a wondrous wild ride this is! Mayson sure made sure she got "close" to Clark with the "K" in her pocket to test him; such a pity for her that it's a fake -- not!! Awesome writing, as usual! EvelynC

Re: FDK - Aussie Rules (59/68) #74512 10/12/10 06:43 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,627 Gulf Shores, AL Shadow Pulitzer
Shadow Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,627 Gulf Shores, AL	Ah, you even bring out the silent lurkers to show our wide-eyed fear of Mayson! Excellent part, evil cliff-hanger. Looking forward to more, Jen "Meg...who let you back in the house?" -Family Guy

Re: FDK - Aussie Rules (59/68) #74513 10/13/10 05:51 AM
Joined: May 2009 Posts: 746 South Africa D DW Columnist
DW Columnist D Joined: May 2009 Posts: 746 South Africa	That really was evil, but knowing that you (or rather Lois and Clark) will probably fix it, makes it a little better. Mayson and her crazy ideas - hope she gets to spend the rest of her life in the loony bin! Just think how happy Luthor will be when he discovers the green rock is worth a lot of money; however, I think his disappointment in not being able to get rid of Superman may trump the happiness. Excellent part and the story almost, just almost, gets better with every part!

Re: FDK - Aussie Rules (59/68) #74514 10/13/10 06:02 AM
Joined: Nov 2004 Posts: 794 houston, tx. lovesuper97 Features Writer
lovesuper97 Features Writer Joined: Nov 2004 Posts: 794 houston, tx.	Really Mayson!!! Really..... Quote "The only way to keep this story from being published is if the announcement of our engagement is in tomorrow's Planet." She is on crack. I mean heavy into it. Someone need to put her down Now!! I will and always be a big fan of Lois and Clark forever and forever.

Re: FDK - Aussie Rules (59/68) #74515 10/13/10 07:21 AM
Joined: Dec 2005 Posts: 2,018 Portland, Oregon, USA F Framework4 Kerth
Framework4 Kerth F Joined: Dec 2005 Posts: 2,018 Portland, Oregon, USA	Delightful part. :Yawn: on the cliffhanger. Not so much of a cliff hanger. By this point in the tale we know your version of Clark will not even be temped. A: He's married. B: Your Mayson is simply not in any way shape or form trustworthy. She'd never keep the deal. Clark knows this so it is a not even a temptation. C: We also know your Mayson, she is not really interested in Clark and her internal monologues have made that clear. So her offer is not sincere, she just wants Clark to say yes so she can reject him. Mayson will be dead soon so she won't be a problem any longer. (Not healthy to have something Lex Luthor wants, nor to ignore his calls.) It will be great fun, Lois Lane will arrive in Metropolis, and take Mayson's place on the staff of the Daily Planet, on a trial basis, solve Mayson's murder and prove Luthor is the "Boss". Framework4

Re: FDK - Aussie Rules (59/68) #74516 10/13/10 07:23 AM
Joined: Dec 2005 Posts: 2,018 Portland, Oregon, USA F Framework4 Kerth
Framework4 Kerth F Joined: Dec 2005 Posts: 2,018 Portland, Oregon, USA	Framework4

Re: FDK - Aussie Rules (59/68) #74517 10/13/10 09:05 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,945 Likes: 28 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,945 Likes: 28	Quote Mayson shook her head. It was highly doubtful that that body belonged to Kent. Only one way to find out. Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK - Aussie Rules (59/68) #74518 10/13/10 01:22 PM
Joined: Dec 2008 Posts: 2,122 Likes: 1 SW Vic, Australia Female Hawk OP Kerth
OP Female Hawk Kerth Joined: Dec 2008 Posts: 2,122 Likes: 1 SW Vic, Australia	Joy It was evil. The part was a bit short, but I wanted to end it there! Thanks for the FDK. Iolanthe Mayson is definitely catty ... and few other things as well. Laura Next part - either tonight or tomorrow morning. I still haven't written the final part yet. Sarah There are a few bumps to get through before the happy ending. Thanks. bellarase Thanks. I don't think anyone likes this incarnation of Mayson. However, the end I have for her isn't nice at all - you might even feel sorry for her! Evelyn LOL. Clark didn't understand why Mayson tried to get so close - he isn't about to go looking through her clothing! However, she proved that Clark isn't Superman! Jen It's kind of funny that someone called 'Shadow' is a self-confessed lurker! Thanks for letting me know you're reading. DW The problem will be fixed. Some of the speculation is very close. lovesuper The thing about this Mayson is that she doesn't realise that she's a little fish playing in a big pond. Sooner or later, the big fish arrives! Framework Good points. Quote It will be great fun, Lois Lane will arrive in Metropolis, and take Mayson's place on the staff of the Daily Planet, on a trial basis, solve Mayson's murder and prove Luthor is the "Boss". I hope this isn't too much of a spoiler ... much of that will happen, but it will happen between part 68 and the epilogue. In other words, the epiloge will make it clear that Lois and Clark brought down Luthor, but not how that happened. I'm not planning a sequel, but if I do write one, there's the plot. Michael You're right - no Lois. However, this part happened between noon and 2pm Metropolis time, which is 2am to 4am Melbourne time, so Lois was sleeping. She'll be back in the next part, I promise! Thanks for everyone for your wonderful FDK, Corrina.

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