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#72201 06/12/10 06:30 PM
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Great story, but it needs a follow up!

#72202 06/12/10 07:11 PM
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Yay! You posted it!

This is a great story, Tank, and I just love how you managed to find *another* way to get Lois a hair cut.

Thanks - I thought it was brilliant.

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#72203 06/12/10 08:52 PM
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I loved it, Tank! A Tank haircut story is always fun. But here you used it to make Clark show Lois how much he loved and respected her. It was great! clap

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#72204 06/13/10 02:50 AM
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<chuckle>

Cute. Of course, if you *really* wanted to surprise your audience, you would have had Lois win the bet and, for a change, escape from one of your stories with her hair intact. But it was a fun story with a nice bit of WAFF thrown in for good measure. :-)

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#72205 06/13/10 02:52 AM
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Loved it too - I could just see Clark showing up the next day with his hair gone too! smile but then he told her he was Superman.

#72206 06/13/10 04:40 AM
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I think that's the best haircut story you've ever written, Tank. A haircut and a reveal!
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#72207 06/14/10 08:46 AM
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I should have known, but I still went in without a clue what was going to happen. To Lois. blush

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Lois cocked her head and looked him straight in the eye. "Unless you've changed them; the winner shaves the loser's head, and the loser has to wear the winner's colors for a week."
Ah, yes. Tank-fic.

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Lois punched Clark in the arm. "Come on, Kent, have a little faith in our team."
Yes, but you've just bet a haircut in a Tank-fic. Now the Hawks would stand a better chance at winning if Superman broke every single one of their players' legs. huh

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"No, Lois, you don't understand." He looked around then moved close and whispered so that only she could hear him. "I'm Superman."
eek No way. He is? eek /wonders if this was a thinly veiled hint to Corrina to speed up the revelation. Either plot-wise or posting-wise laugh And for the record, option two is the far superior choice laugh

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#72208 06/15/10 02:03 PM
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I loved it. Right up until the reveal. I hate public revelations, but not enough to dislike your story.

A great tribute to a great fic.


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