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Comments anyone? I'd really appreciate some feedback.

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But then again, it should be quite fascinating to see the frying pan meet the buns of steel at some point in time. Preferably without his mother watching.
Lois is thinking about using the frying pan against Clark's buns of steel! That's so funny!

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But for now, girls of the Kent household – unite.
Yes, it was Martha's idea!

This was a delighttful little romp and a sweet and funny first fic, True Love!

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that was so funny! I Truly Love Your Work, True Love! laugh thank you for sharing!


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There were some fun twists in there laugh But I think Lois getting mad over the missed chocolate recipes was the best clap

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That was hysterical! Thanks for starting my day with a smile. smile

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I burst out laughing reading this fic.

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@Iolanthe: me too. lol. it was great timing that Lynn's fic about Martha's unique mommisms came out around the same time. Martha is LURVE!!!

@True Love: would it be alright to request a Jonathan fic, True Love? smile I love the relationship between father and son, and i'm sure he's had his moments when he had to discipline Clark in some way. laugh


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Hi everyone!

Thank you very much for all of your encouraging comments. I'm glad you enjoyed my little shot at writing Lois and Clark fic.

TOC - Thanks. Just FYI, when it comes to the idea of a frying pan meeting the buns of steel - I've actually had that thought for a really long time. I just never got the guts to try and put it into words... or a way to incorporate it into some type of "real" story.

Darth Michael - I'm glad you enjoyed the idea of Lois getting mad over **drum roll please** chocolate. It has actually taken me quite some time to figure out what Lois could be so mad about at Clark to glare at him and poke him for the rest of the story to work. (Granted, Lois might not even need a reason to be mad at Clark to behave as Mad Dog Lane sometimes, but I'm somewhat lacking in the creativity department.) smile1

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True Love: just call me Sayo. laugh nope, no ideas, i'm afraid. surprise me? when you have the time. good luck with college! smile i loved college. now, i teach college kids, and they're just the funnest bunch!


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Sayo: I'll give it some thought over the coming week and hopefully something will strike me enough to write itself by next weekened, when I should get some more free time.

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@True Love: Thank you! ^_^ I have a bit of free time this week. If you want, I can write a one-shot for you in return, just let me know what theme/s you want in it. We can kinda kinda exchange gifts, make it an early Christmas! laugh


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Adorable LOL


Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”

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LOL That was HILarioUS


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