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Hi Lisa! Great story. I loved it. Congratulations!  I noticed a few mistakes, but your GE will edit them once you send your story for submission, so there's nothing to worry about. Keep writing. AnnaBtG.
What we've got here is failure to communicate...
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Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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Hi, Congratulation!  Beautiful and sweet. 
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
MAF
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This story is beautiful. Ava is adorable, and your characterisation of Lois is spot on  Keep up the good work! HC 
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Cute The next!!! 
"Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot
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Everyone, thanks for reading and reviewing! You're kind comments are appreciated greatly!
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Lisa,
You have some moments in here that are just absolutely gorgeous.
Nice work and thanks for posting,
CC
You mean we're supposed to have lives?
Oh crap!
~Tank
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Boards Chief Administrator Emeritus Nobel Peace Prize Winner
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Thanks for sharing this one with us, Lisa - I really enjoyed it. Not sure if it's your first fanfic or just the first you've posted in this fandom, but it was an assured and confident piece of writing anyway. Hoping to see more from you soon! LabRat
Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly.
Aramis: Yes, sorry.
Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal.
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Lisa
beautiful and sweet story
merry
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Thanks again everyone for your comments. This is my first fanfic and my first time posting on the board. I got some great feedback and so for the next few weeks, I will be busy making some(hopefully final) minor and major adjustments. I'll let you know when it's up in the archive so you can read the finished product because I have a feeling that when I'm done, some parts may be different. Anyway, thanks again!
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