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FDK: Boy in Black (54/54) #69054 01/28/10 12:49 PM
Joined: Jan 2007 Posts: 921 A anonpip OP Features Writer
OP anonpip Features Writer A Joined: Jan 2007 Posts: 921	Last words?

Re: FDK: Boy in Black (54/54) #69055 01/28/10 01:10 PM
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robinson Beat Reporter R Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 326	What a wonderful story! I loved how you filled in all the main missing events through the years. I absolutely love the last line. What a wonderful romantic sentiment. Thank you Kathy www.chili-everyway.com robinson

Re: FDK: Boy in Black (54/54) #69056 01/28/10 01:27 PM
Joined: Apr 2008 Posts: 377 USA S sarahg Beat Reporter
sarahg Beat Reporter S Joined: Apr 2008 Posts: 377 USA	its over? LOVED it!! can't wait for a sequel, or more of your stuff!

Re: FDK: Boy in Black (54/54) #69057 01/28/10 03:03 PM
Joined: Feb 2008 Posts: 2,823 IolantheAlias Pulitzer
IolantheAlias Pulitzer Joined: Feb 2008 Posts: 2,823	Awww.....!! The ending was just perfect. All the angst dried up, Clark and Lois coming to terms...great fic.

Re: FDK: Boy in Black (54/54) #69058 01/28/10 09:04 PM
Joined: Dec 2005 Posts: 2,018 Portland, Oregon, USA F Framework4 Kerth
Framework4 Kerth F Joined: Dec 2005 Posts: 2,018 Portland, Oregon, USA	Delightful. Framework4

Re: FDK: Boy in Black (54/54) #69059 01/29/10 03:05 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 172 New York Seme Hack from Nowheresville
Seme Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 172 New York	Loved it

Re: FDK: Boy in Black (54/54) #69060 01/30/10 12:10 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,956 Likes: 28 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,956 Likes: 28	Awwwww that was a waffy ending. I so did not see the 2xKent coming. Thought at first that Perry was just joking around. Nice touch The Kerths cracked me up and of course, Perry's remark about getting him another Kerth-winning story before the wedding, well talk about pressure Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK: Boy in Black (54/54) #69061 01/31/10 12:16 PM
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OP anonpip Features Writer A Joined: Jan 2007 Posts: 921	Thank you all! I'm so glad the ending didn't fall flat. I know, Michael, when I started this story I estimated it would be about half the length of Breaking Up, instead it's nearly half again longer. But at least I finished it before my DD was a year old. (Considering that I had planned to finish it before she was born, this is a bit of a hollow accomplishment, but still...) It will be awhile before the next long story, although I do know what it is. I started it awhile back, but since it's only three pages right now, it's no where near ready for posting. It is further along than any of the other half dozen or so started stories on my laptop.

Re: FDK: Boy in Black (54/54) #69062 01/31/10 12:23 PM
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carolm Pulitzer C Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,764 Southwest MO	Out of everything in the thread this is what really jumps out at me : Quote Originally posted by anonpip: I started it awhile back, but since it's only three pages right now, it's no where near ready for posting. Hmmm... Have I seen this? [Of course the rest was pretty much what I expected [great ending, loved it, etc] so of course that stood out =D.] Carol [who still wants more ] My articles Debt Free Blog: Normal is BROKE! Be Weird! - Under Construction

Re: FDK: Boy in Black (54/54) #69063 01/31/10 12:37 PM
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OP anonpip Features Writer A Joined: Jan 2007 Posts: 921	No, you haven't seen it. Have you seen any of my half hearted attempts at fics that are not done? I think I may have sent you the one about Lex, but not sure. The one I'm planning for next is the sequel to Gestation and I don't think it's seen the outside of my hard drive. I should also say, I wrote the three pages written during Rye's first week being out of the womb and haven't looked at it since. So in all likelihood it's three pages of nonsense and I'll be lucky if any of it constitutes an actual word.

Re: FDK: Boy in Black (54/54) #69064 01/31/10 12:42 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,764 Southwest MO C carolm Pulitzer
carolm Pulitzer C Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,764 Southwest MO	Well, you know you are always welcome to send anything over. I'm sure between the two of us [and maybe Rye] we could pull a word or two - maybe even a dozen out of it . My articles Debt Free Blog: Normal is BROKE! Be Weird! - Under Construction

Re: FDK: Boy in Black (54/54) #69065 01/31/10 12:51 PM
Joined: Jan 2007 Posts: 921 A anonpip OP Features Writer
OP anonpip Features Writer A Joined: Jan 2007 Posts: 921	Look for it soon. Rye was looking to contribute, but then realized she could suck on her hand if it wasn't banging on the keyboard...

Re: FDK: Boy in Black (54/54) #69066 02/01/10 02:56 AM
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amberlea Columnist A Joined: Jul 2008 Posts: 581 Sugar Land, TX	I really like how you wrapped up this story...the flashback scenes were a fantastic way to fill in more of the story! I also loved the little details, like your explanation of when and why Lois changed her name, and how you worked Jimmy in. Great story, and I hope to see more of your stuff soon! Amber

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