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FDK: Games People Play (2/4) #67462 11/13/09 05:58 PM
Joined: Jan 2007 Posts: 1,069 Georgia BJ OP Top Banana
OP BJ Top Banana Joined: Jan 2007 Posts: 1,069 Georgia	Nan, I don't think I responded to part one, but I am reading and really enjoying this follow up story. It was great fun seeing Lois watch Clark so closely in this part, picking up all the Superman clues she'd missed before. Love it! I also enjoyed Clark's subtle and not-so subtle teasing of Lois. Cute! BJ

Re: FDK: Games People Play (2/4) #67463 11/14/09 04:37 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,956 Likes: 28 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,956 Likes: 28	Quote "There's always your windows," Clark pointed out, raising his voice a little so she could hear him from the kitchenette, where he was refilling the coffee cups. "Do you lock them?" No? Otherwise, how could Superman float inside? There really seems to be a huge shift in their interactions compared to where they had been on the show. What a difference a more open Lois makes Quote "Why that -- that peeping Tom!" she said. I have to join Brenda, Lois putting more and more pieces together now that she knows is great fun Can't wait what they're going to find down there. Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK: Games People Play (2/4) #67464 11/14/09 03:25 PM
Joined: Apr 2008 Posts: 1,371 Likes: 1 Corvallis bobbart Top Banana
bobbart Top Banana Joined: Apr 2008 Posts: 1,371 Likes: 1 Corvallis	This is just so great watching the way Lois has changed her interaction with Calrk. Little things like this are fun: Quote "Since you decided to take a nap, I did, too." "Were you tired?" I hear this as "YOU get tired?" I suspect that, mentally at least, she's taking notes. And then during this converation I was just rollimg my eyes the whole time: Quote "Anyway, I talked to Superman... ... He checked out your apartment for me. ... "Did Superman clear them out?" This is all so funny given what Lois knows. And this: Quote Did I hear you tell Perry that you were kidnapped again?" Bob

Re: FDK: Games People Play (2/4) #67465 11/15/09 03:33 PM
Joined: Feb 2008 Posts: 2,823 IolantheAlias Pulitzer
IolantheAlias Pulitzer Joined: Feb 2008 Posts: 2,823	I'm just wondering if they're going to be OK on their late-night Lex Tower snooping trip?! What about hidden cameras inside? Surely Superman can see and neutralize them? Does Lex have a secret stash of kryptonite that they might run into? Or will they just find a whole lot of nothing? The other posters have already posted much better feedback about Lois putting the pieces together, so I won't re-invent the wheel. I just want to say, though, it's a lot of fun to see the process through her eyes!

Re: FDK: Games People Play (2/4) #67466 11/15/09 09:05 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 18 D Deb Blogger
Deb Blogger D Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 18	Great contiuation! debc on IRC

Re: FDK: Games People Play (2/4) #67467 11/21/09 08:24 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,380 Likes: 1 The Lone Star State Nan Kerth
Nan Kerth Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,380 Likes: 1 The Lone Star State	Thanks, everyone. It has been a busy week, and I have only about 2 pages written. I hope to be able to post on Monday, if I'm lucky, but more probably Tuesday. My nephew and his family will be visiting tomorrow, and a family friend, who was Jimmy's Special Olympics coach, is in town on Monday. My family will be going to dinner with him and his wife on Monday evening, so it is more likely that I'll be able to finish the next part on Tuesday. Nan Earth is the insane asylum for the universe.

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