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Any comments or hints or ways to improve would be appreciated. -- Taivas Reflections TOC
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Hi, Great part.  More soon, please. MAF 
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Good part...  The idea of Lois finding the photo was a good touch more!!!  Jose 
"Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot
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Good instalment.
It was fun seeing Lois going full bore.
I think Henderson has them figured out, just as Martha and Jonathan do.
Tank (who wonders how many things can go wrong at the Ball this time)
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Taivas Another great part!  Tricia 
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Thank you for your comments. I'll try to keep the time between postings reasonable. And you'll never know what can go wrong with nosey reporters at a formal ball.
Like I said, I have no buffer, and I am making this up as I go along. So any plot suggestions are welcome.
-- Taivas (still dry on the west coast of the U.S.)
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Their relationship is developing a very promising way, though we don't yet know Clark's thoughts.
Hope they are going to have very tight situations where Clark can discover that he can trust Lois - now he is very vary. And of course a smoochie could happen very soon.
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taivas,
great part
ditto others
more soon please
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Hi Taivas, Where is my monthly dose of "Reflections"?  MAF 
Maria D. Ferdez.
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MAF
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Hi, Its December! ![[Linked Image]](http://1000smilies.com/snowman.gif) MAF ![[Linked Image]](http://1000smilies.com/thundercloud.gif)
Maria D. Ferdez.
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First off, WOW, very well done.  Second, it looks like it has been sitting since September 2003. It appears as if Taivas's last post to the board was starting this feedback topic. It also seems that almost all his posts were centered around this one unfinished story. Anyone ever hear from him after 9/03?
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