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FDK goes here! More tomorrow  . Thanks! Carol
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Whoa, wait, what??? That sounds like a setup... or, wait, I think I know. Now for them to wake up.. heh.
"You need me. You wouldn't be much of a hero without a villain. And you do love being the hero, don't you. The cheering children, the swooning women, you love it so much, it's made you my most reliable accomplice." -- Lex Luthor to Superman, Question Authority, Justice League Unlimited
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*catching up some*
translation from evil authorness to standard english, =P :
"There, on his bed, was (a clothed) Lois Kent in the arms of a naked man."
right?
Carol get back here!
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I'm guessing he mistook Lucy for Lois.
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Whew, I like cookiesmom's theory. Saved me from a whole rave of ranting about a new brand of EVIL.  Great part (and heh, of course Martha wouldn't be out of the S loop for long. She's Martha. She knows all.) JD
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Carol! Just got caught up. Read all 5 chapters. Love it! But what are you doing? Lois WITH another man? I'm hyperventilating here!  ~Sheila
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"What happened?" he whispered.
"Here, drink this."
A cool hand behind his neck helped him lean up enough to take a sip of water. What? No buttermilk? Great part, but it really didn't end well.
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Fun part Carol, but the ending sort of blocked things out. There, on his bed, was Lois Kent.
In the arms of another man.
Naked. I think this needs a proper response. [img] http://farm1.static.flickr.com/176/450382623_8ec38093bc.jpg?v=0[/img] ![[Linked Image]](http://bp1.blogger.com/_RuBeixBYTPA/SApwVFtxPGI/AAAAAAAAAMg/LMFx7Fbxylg/S220/Mob.jpg) ![[Linked Image]](http://www.cartoonstock.com/lowres/wda1366l.jpg) Michael  PS: Unless it's Lucy and some guy. But then, Martha might not be too happy that her still in high-school-but-probably-already-eighteen-years-old daughter is naked with a guy upstairs.
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See how she toys with us?! She's the cat and we're the mouse. It's just so easy for her.  Cackling with glee, Carol. What a romp!
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 Michael's response looks like the right one. Where's my pitchfork? You can't leave it there! It's just wrong! Tara
Rose: You're NOT keeping the horse!
Doctor Who: I let you keep Mickey, now lets go!
Doctor Who, The Girl in the Fireplace
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Evil? Moi? Couldn't be! Karen - loved hearing your theory in IRC! Sara - LOL! Love the translation! Cookiesmom - great theory! Sarah - ditto . JD - aw, but I wanted to hear the rave! And of course! She's Martha! Sheila - glad you got caught up! Get a brown paper sack and breathe in and out... Female Hawk - not after passing out from radiation poisoning. After finding Lois naked in his bed with another guy - maybe .Er, or something like that. Michael - tell me how you really feel! Happy girl - here mousey mousey! I'm having great fun with this little romp as well! Tara!!! - /me hides pitchfork Look for next post here shortly as I have a lot of work to do tonight . Thanks! Carol
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Well, I don't to images unless I like what I'm reading. Michael 
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Thank you for posting so quickly. I love reading your work. What a unique story.
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Wheeeee! A newbie! Hi Jamma! So glad you're enjoying it! Look for 7 here in a bit . Carol
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Ewww! I'd hate to find that in my room at a B&B. Still it needs to be written more clearly. There on the bed was Lois with a naked man? There on the bed was another man with Lois who was naked? There on the bed was Lois with another man and they were both naked?
BTW, I thought it was interesting that the citizens of Smallville were more annoyed with the Feds than they were reticent about talking with an outsider. The list of people who talked with him was a little confusing with so many descriptions mixed in with the names. Felt a bit like name-dropping.
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who didn't mean to be so picky, but obviously I'm in a mood
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W-W-W-Wuhhhh?!?!? Doesn't she have her own room... Btw, if you are going to continue slipping the nakies in people will forget that there was actual plot... j/k. Entrance of Kryptonite and the first revelation, though Lois got very close 2 chapters ago. The plotbunnies have been breeding.
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