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All feedback welcome. Thanks. 
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This is an very good story so far. Keep it going!
I will and always be a big fan of Lois and Clark forever and forever.
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Oh, I love how this has started. I don't think I've ever read an Alt-Clark story where he went back in time to relive those 3-years over again, this time with Lois at the Planet and he with his secret identity intact.
Will we get more back-story - like finding out how he dealt with Lana? AltClark probably wasn't engaged to Lana in 1993, but he obviously had a long-term relationship with her and she knew about Alt-Clark's differences.
It's interesting that you've inserted Tex in Lex's place. Or maybe Tempus did that himself, eh? Story is interesting and I wants more.
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I am loving this - I love married lois-clark fics, not so hot on alt-clark, but this story has an interesting take on the situation, can't wait for more!
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Very fascinating, and I love the mix of seasons. Looking forward to more...
PJ
"You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed.
He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement."
"You can say that again," she told him.
"I have a...."
"Oh, shut up."
--Stardust, Caroline K
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Whoa! Great story. Keep it coming! I love the interplay between all the characters.  Artemis
History is easy once you've lived it. - Duncan MacLeod
Writing history is easy once you've lived it. - Artemis
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Kerth
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To lovesuper97, BJ, Sarahg, ChiefPam and Artemis - thanks for reading the story and posting such encouraging FDK.
The second part should be posted in 2-3 days.
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Cool start! I am already hooked! Now our Clark can be like the big brother for the other Clark and help him get through this. I am glad the other Lois is already seeing how bad Tempus is and what she has in her Clark. The wedding of course is a dilemma but I have hope for all 4.  Looking forward to the next part, Natascha
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Oh I really like this so far. More soon please! Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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I'm liking it so far. I've always liked alt-universe stories and this is set up to be a good one. Please post more soon.
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Very intriguing start. The thing I haven't figured out yet, is if Lois has only just learned about her fiance's nefarious ways or if he has been blackmailing her for a longer time  Michael, who recommends that superheroes wear bulletproof vests 
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Kerth
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Thanks for the FDK!
Natascha - re: the big brother bit - that's only the half of it!
Laura - Glad you're enjoying so far. Thanks for posting FDK.
IolantheAlias - Second part is posted. Thanks for reading and FDK.
Michael - hopefully your question will be answered in later parts.
As for the bullet-proof vests - I was unaware Kryptonite-proof vests were available!! If only Lois had one... or two.
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Hey  Loved the story so far... cant wait to read the rest...oo there's another part around so I'd better check on it faster than a speeding bullet. Loved Clark trying to help his Junior... Afterall they are 5 years appart and Clark has a lot to share. Poor Not-our Clark sounds really lost. But there's hope now that Not-our Lois is thinking about him too. MDL.
"Work while you have the light. You are responsible for the talent that has been entrusted to you."
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