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 Yay! I love this universe ^.^ The scene in the park had me giggling... and I liked catching up with Jack a bit =)
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Whoops, missed this one. I will start reading it on Tuesday...
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Great part Nan.  You may be "setting things up" but the whole "maintaining appearances for Lex" theme adds a nontrivial level of tension to the mix. Even with the advantages that Clark's abilities bring in, the Lex "machine" is creepy to be trying to deceive.  Bob
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Good part, Nan. Keep it coming!  Artemis
History is easy once you've lived it. - Duncan MacLeod
Writing history is easy once you've lived it. - Artemis
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More is wanted, and soon!
I always go "yay!" at the sight of a new Nan fic - your fics are always so interesting and so much fun to read!
I agree with previous posters - the Luthor "machine" is very frightening. I hope that our heroes and their helpers can make it through with no problems! (But wait - if no problems - then no story, right?)
Please post more soon!
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Great to see another part, Nan!
You may be setting things up, but it's still appropriately creepy with tails, spies and killers on the loose. Just the way I like it. :p
JD
"Meg...who let you back in the house?" -Family Guy
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Glad your feeling up to posting Nan.
Looking forward to more of this story soon.
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I don't know how I missed the first part of this... but I'm caught up now  Lovely intricate universe to play in, and I always love Charlie Look forward to lots of thrills and chills  PJ
"You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed.
He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement."
"You can say that again," she told him.
"I have a...."
"Oh, shut up."
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Nan, just thought I'd ask if this one has been put on a back burner for now? 
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Yes and no. I've kind of hit a writer's block, and it's weird because I know where I want to take it. I'm still working on it, believe it or not. My usual way of dealing with writer's block is to write something else until the jam clears itself, which is what I'm doing.
Thanks for asking. I really am still working on it, just not on the computer, and when I clear the jam, it will be back.
Nan
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Thanks Nan, I'll be looking forward to reading it, when the writer's block goes away.
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I'm in agreement with previous posters. I would certainly like to see more. Please post when you can.
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