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Would appreciate any comments posted here. I've written through part 18, and working out the reviewing them with my beta readers. Thanks for all the comments so far.

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Max:
Very good section. Shows the building attraction and the emotions of both parties.
Keep it coming.
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Mr. Kent in charge, like it. Liking this softer Lois.


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Okay, finally got caught up smile

It's really interesting to see a more balanced relationship between LnC. And since Lois isn't as gun shy when it comes to men, Clark might just be in for a world of trouble laugh

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