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Interesting start.... I was sure Subject 001 was Cat until Kara popped up... can't wait to see where you take this.


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Very interesting. I also thought that Cat was subject 001. I'm curious to see what's going to happen with her (I admit it,I love Cat), and I loved seeing her technology struggles. wink

FYI, marking your story parts with the blue arrow thingy (one of the icons above the box where you type your post) makes it easier for people to find, and it is less likely that people will accidentally pass over your story.

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Interesting. I didn't think that it was Cat b/c ... well, not sure why wink .

Am interested to see what happens!

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Fun fic so far.

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“...so Angela says that she last saw Cat ten or eleven years ago and that she'd completely cut herself off from the world...can you imagine that?”

“As long as she had a personal 'staff' of attractive, well-muscled men to cater to her every whim..
Tee-hee! Sounds like fun to me (for a few days, anyway).

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Clark chuckled.

“What?”

“'In my day'?”

“Oh my god...did I really just say that?”
OMG. Lois is officially old.

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“Lois, Clark, I'd like to introduce you to someone who will hopefully become the newest member of the news team, Kara King."
Dah-dah-dah! (Ominous drumbeats). Could this be....(whisper)...Supergirl?

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“Clark...I think I accidentally gave Lucy permission to borrow my car.”

“You're paying the insurance if she crashes it again.”
A great line.

Also, I agree with the poster above - can you get one of those blue arrow thingies? It makes it easier to differentiate new fic postings from feedback. Thanks!

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Lieta, Beth. S, carolm and IolantheAlias:

Thank you for the feedback!

I've changed both parts to display the little blue arrows laugh

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Hi Sue Kay!

I, too, was thinking Cat. No can't be? Cat? Nah... Wonder how Cat managed to get so lost in time? She almost looks like she is living in her own little world, like she is in trance or something.

Kara was a dead giveaway smile

Nice how understatedly Lois marked her territory.

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Hi Michael!

There is a reason why Cat is so out of step, and Kara's introduction was meant to be a dead giveaway, kind of like the introduction of Clark in the pilot (y'know...the CK suitcase lol laugh )

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Cat was abducted by aliens? New Kryptonians?


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Cat was abducted by aliens? New Kryptonians?
'Fraid not!

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Interesting.

I don't think Kara is subject001. Sure she is there, but that's too obvious... red herring anyone?

Either way, interesting to see the dynamic play out.. I doubt with her super-senses it will be long before she puts the S in Clark Kent. wink

and Cat... well... I'll reserve my judgement on her for the time being, but doesn't it seem a tad suspicious that she rocks back into the Planet with the same computer she walked out with?
Doesn't sound like that life of luxury everyone thinks she's been living to me....


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Lisamaree, the Evil Kiwi - Thanks for the feedback!!

Chapter Two is now up:
http://www.lcficmbs.com/ubb/ultimatebb.php?ubb=get_topic;f=1;t=010142


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