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#53838 07/14/08 01:17 PM
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Nice to see the Kent kiddos make another appearance. Clark was sweet with his girls.

I want Clark to get super again so Lois will get off his back. I know that is not fair to her but she is so negative with him.

Nice to see them have a "good night" at the end of the chapter.

#53839 07/15/08 07:24 AM
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Jenni,

I am absolutely loving this story and how you are mixing in the ups and downs and adjustments of their relationship. The Forgotten is one of my favorite stories and I am glad you are doing the continuation


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Sorry I'm so late to this party. This was an adorable chapter. I love how you depicted the Kents' family life. There is so much love and warmth here. It is hard for Lois and the Kent kids to accept that Clark takes risks and might be hurt, maybe even killed, but it used to be like that for Clark when it came to Lois. When you love someone, you probably have to accept that they won't be able to change the essence of who they are, even if that means that they are going to keep putting themselves at risk. On the other hand, if you love someone, you should try for your loved one(s) sake not to break their hearts by getting yourself seriously injured or killed.

I love this portrayal of the Kent family and look forward to more parts of this story!

Ann

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Hi Robinson,

It's great to find I have another reader, and I truly appreciate you taking time to leave your comments. smile

I'm glad you liked The Forgotten and are enjoying the sequel.

Yours Jenni

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Jenni, this is so great.

I completely understand Lois' fear, but it was so great for her to realize that Clark will always do what he can to help, not matter what powers he has. I'm loving this story so much.

#53843 07/16/08 07:30 AM
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Still reading.

You handled the converstations beautifully.

James


“…with God everything is possible.” Matthew 19:26.


Also read Nan's Terran Underground!
#53844 07/17/08 08:15 AM
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Hi,

Once more I want to thank my readers for sticking with my story and leaving me fdk.

Believe me, I enjoy writing L&C fanfic, but feedback on a story is like icing on a cake to a writer ... and the cherry on the top. wink

Well, it is to me, and I do appreciate it very much. smile

Yours Jenni

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Aw, shoot! thumbsup Love those family scenes.

#53846 07/27/08 09:59 AM
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I hope part 10 is coming out soon!

#53847 07/28/08 02:09 AM
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Hi,

I'm feeling very bad about this, but I really don't have a part ready for posting today, and I feel too tired to work on it right now.

We had a very good vacation, but my husband was ill when he got back home, and I had quite a time looking after him. He does feel a little better today, but taking care of John after the long journey home has made me feel very tired.

I hope you all understand and cut me some slack. smile

I don't intend to keep you waiting another week, but I will try to post part 10 on Wednesday.

Yours Jenni

#53848 07/28/08 05:12 AM
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Jenni, don't worry about posting. Take it easy and rest. I hope your husband's getting better. Don't beat yourself. I'll be waiting, whenever you're ready to post next part. smile

Take care,
Andreia


"My wife's love is what unites Krypton and Earth in my heart. Without it, without her, I truly would be in hell."

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#53849 07/28/08 10:44 AM
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Jenni, our reading pleasure take a big backseat to your family.

Get some rest and we will be waiting when you feel up to posting.

#53850 07/29/08 01:34 AM
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Yes, we can wait...barely smile

Hope Hubby feels better soon.
James


“…with God everything is possible.” Matthew 19:26.


Also read Nan's Terran Underground!

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