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I'm glad Lori found the bag (and very proud of myself for figuring out where she was going), but I'm worried that the crime rate tends to go up around her.


Elisabeth

Those last words... he's jinxed her!

Great part. Lori's up for more adventure. Good thing she's wearing her earrings. Now if Steph is really a psycho, now's the time for her move.

Artemis

The mystery deepens even more.

So. Lori has found "the bag" and is about to enter a dark area of the city which will give someone a shot at her. I hope Clark is keeping super-track of her. I think he'll be needed very soon. I just hope the bag and its contents are worth the trouble she's about to be in.

You threw me when Robert Jones said he'd worked at the tour for about six months, then a few minutes later said he'd been there for ten years. But then I figured out that he meant that he'd lived either on the moon or in the city for ten years.

Keep it coming! I'm still interested and still reading.

Very entertaining part, Nan. First I thought Lori would sneak into the cave, then there was the suspension of her getting assaulted in a random act of violence while she was alone with a stranger in the Heinlein Caves. And all in between you kept mentioning dark streets. And now that nothing has happened in this part will mean something is likely to happen in the next one.

And the comment of the Loonie on how men wasn't supposed to live on Earth

Michael

very sneeky...but now, Lori has to get home....or at least to the hotel.

Your writing is so vivid, it really is. Your plots are incredible and this one is no exception! I am looking forward to reading more!