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I'm curious to see where Lori is going. Lost and found?
You've written a very enchanting whodunnit. I can't quite figure out the next step, no matter what happens.
By the way, I didn't understand about the red glow in the caverns. Was that something Clark did or was it a natural phenomenon?
Elisabeth
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Well, Clark welded a crack in the ceiling together with his heat vision. After that, there was the emergency lighting. I'm not sure which one you're talking about but those are the only red glows that I wrote about.
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As always - fabulous and intriguing. Can't wait to see where it's going. Did enjoy seeing Stephanie freak out a bit  . More soon! Carol
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OK, Clark is busy being Superman and Lois is going to investigate something on her own... time for the bad guys to put in an appearance!
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Very exciting part, Nan! So why was Stephanie on the ride if she didn't want to see the caverns, hmm? Looking for the suitcase? I figured the red glow toward the end was the lights on low power mode. Yes, there is no darkness as complete as in a dark cave. As Marcus says, now's the time for Lori to get in trouble! More soon.  Artemis
History is easy once you've lived it. - Duncan MacLeod
Writing history is easy once you've lived it. - Artemis
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Great installment, Nan. Didn't see that meteorite coming at all  Michael
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Loving this story. I like how Superman wasn't able to get them out easily. Now, was that due to Superman needing a convienent way to keep Clark's ID safe?
Steph just keeps getting better and better...
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Boy, Lori not only attracts murderous jewel thieves and delusional tramps, but also meteorites! That girl has power... Btw, I was re-reading earlier parts and wanted to let you know that I liked the bits where Zeb calls Lori "grandma" <g> PJ
"You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed.
He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement."
"You can say that again," she told him.
"I have a...."
"Oh, shut up."
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