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Nice! It's amazing how changing one little thing or attitude revamps the entire story.

Intriguing.

Yeah, Clark. Lois loved your article. *roll eyes*

More soon .
Carol

Nice, but Perry was a bit mean, setting Clark up for a fall like that. Makes me wonder, will Clark realize one day, like during the wedding reception, "Wait a second! Perry, you set me up when you placed Lois in charge of my copy, didn't you!?"

Michael

Great to see you started posting! I also loved the phone conversation.

I really sympathize with Clark here. You really get to see how much his past has influenced him.

Thanks for all the comments! I was a little worried that this early on it would seem too much like the show to be interesting at all.

Michael - I hadn't really considered it, but you're right. Perry was sort of mean to Clark. I wish I had a good excuse for it, but I just never thought of it that way. I thought it was sort of funny for him to make Lois do this, but hadn't thought about the fact that while it wasn't surprising that Perry wouldn't be interested in having someone with as little experience as Clark freelance, he wouldn't be mean to him either.

Having overheard Perry's comment, Clark already knows he's been set up.

I think that Clark's persistence in asking to do freelance work was very in character. Seeing how he has never put down roots before, it almost would seem out of context that he would want to start now.

Intriguing that Clark hasn't fallen in love with Lois.

Also thought the phone call was spot on.


Keep up the good work.


Elisabeth

Thanks, Elisabeth!

I have to admit, though, I wouldn't hold out too much hope for Clark not falling in love with Lois pretty quickly. Well, maybe not in love, but in like...