Wow!
He wasn't given more than an instant to take in its appearance, however, for the pain hit him at once. His muscles cramped in agony, his stomach lurched and a wave of weakness washed over him. The strength seemed to run out of his muscles like water from an upended glass.
What amazing imagery! This was incredible!
I'm loving your story. It has such great detail and so many different things going on. It's great to see Lois and Clark "growing up" together.
No! You can't leave it like this.