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So how soon till Clark retrieves Lois's wet tape for her?


Which he can't use without proving that he stole Lois's story!

Oh good. How about a sequel where they BOTH leave and travel the world together? Some events can occur that place Clark in a position of lying to Lois or telling her about himself.

He can decide to be honest, expecting her to either reject him or like Lana to ask him to never use his abilities. Lois does neither and together they can invent Superman.

Since Claude stole Lois's gunrunner story when she was 21 and in this fic she is 23 they can spend a little time traveling and grab hold of the evil that is Lex Luthor from the other end of the world and follow it back to Metropolis.

Along the way it would be nice if they write a few books and did some hard hitting international stories.

Wow, Laura! Another fabulous chapter! I've been studying most of the night for a test tomorrow and I needed this break. So imagine how excited I was to see this update!

I don't have much time for my usual proper feedback, but I'm still with you! I knew it! This guy is apparently one of the few good and honest cops in that police department...besides Henderson.
Lane and Kent can partner up at the Daily Planet instead. Wouldn't it be poetic justice for both of them to replace Claude?

Well done, Laura! You're all that and a bag of chips! Not so long for the next part...ay?

~Sheila

Wow! I love Patrick's suggestion!

One thing that bothered me from the beginning of this fic is that Clark and Lois are not equals. But if they were to travel together, discovering the world together, they could also work out their own feelings for one another and decide together what they want to do with their lives. They could learn to trust and rely on each other in a way that could be truly wonderful. And they could invent Superman together.

However, Laura, I'm not trying to suggest that this would be the only acceptable way of ending your fic. Goodness, no! (Although I do think that it would be the best way of ending it! )

No, but I really appreciated how you made Lois realize how badly she had treated Clark. I felt, after that, that there is hope for them as a couple, which is something I haven't really felt before.

I thought Clark's accusation of her came too quickly. He should have asked her what had happened, why she was soaking wet and why her shoes were missing, before he asked her anything else. But I liked the way Lois stood up to him. She is on her way to becoming his equal if she can stand up to him when she is right about the thing they are discussing.

I also still like the fact that Claude saved Lois's life, but I agree with everyone else that Claude nevertheless needs to be punished for his role in this.

Anyway, it seems as if you have decided to take Clark out of the teaching business. Good. I don't think that teaching is the best profession for him, certainly not if he is going to be Superman. Imagine all the lovestruck teenaged girls mooning over him and perhaps "spying" on him as he is trying to change into Superman and fly off to do heroics. How long would it take before his secret was blown?

I want him to be Superman, and I hope that Lois can help him become a man who will use his powers in public to help others. It's time for him to stop being ashamed of what he is, and I hope Lois can help him become comfortable with the person that he actually is!

Ann

I loved it but I am late for work because I couldn't stop reading.

And I love the sentence "like hell you are"

Ahh, Laura. Another amazing chapter. *sigh* I adore this story!

Lois is growing up. Yay!

I just loved all of this part. Especially Clark's reaction to Lois saying she was leaving. They are so perfect together.

More soon? Please?

~Anna.

Wonderful part! I especially liked how it ended.

I'm definitely voting for more kissing! I like how their argument/talk took place during a thunder storm--nice touch.

Can't wait to read the next part!

Yey he kissed her!!!! I hope this means he's given up any foolish idea of leaving and staying away from Lois! I know this stories not over yet, but is there any chance for a sequel????? Please???

I only have a moment here, but wanted you to know that I really liked this chapter!

And I LOVED the kiss!!

Vonceil

Hi,

Great part! Take a swim on that tank of water and safe the evidence, identification and shoes.


Love it!

I can't image Clark saying “Like hell you are.”


More ASAP, please.

MAF

Hah, this very well sums up the past couple of parts. I love this line! I can't believe Clark accused her of calling the cops on them both. I know Lois has been working undercover, but please, Clark, get with the program.

And you left us at a killer cliff-hanger! Most excellent!

JD

Loved it!!!! More, more, more!

No time to comment, except to say that I'm still here.

Maria, companies pay dividends to those who have invested in the company when they make a profit. So, he is saying that his work combined with hers will be profitable.

Elisabeth

Laura, I apologize in advance for no quotes, but I stayed up obscenely late tonight to read this part since I knew it was already posted and now I'm too tired to keep my eyes open.

They are AWFUL at miscommunication - sheesh! They couldn't get any better at it with any amount of practice - good grief!

But I thoroughly enjoyed the part and I love Assertive!Clark almost as much as Protective!Clark -- and so I loved his last statement "Like hell you are" --- Ooooooh, yummy!

Can't wait to find out what she has to say to that (if anything - personally if the man I loved said that to me before giving me a mind-blowing kiss, I don't think I'd be able to put two words together <bg>)

And I can't wait to find out what Perry is gonna think of Claude - and if Lois & Clark end up working together at the Planet or if you have something else up your sleeve for them.

And will Clark take her to Smallville?

And will he kiss her again? Or will she kiss him?

And will Lexy get her just desserts?


I'm here... I'm waiting...

I'm impatient.

<g> -- DJ

Hey guys, I appreciate the feedback.

Patrick-- Hmmm... that's an excellent idea. However my muse just ran off and added in a scene I wholly didn't expect into chapter 13. It might add a few more chapters onto this story and I don't know how well it would work with yours. But though it still might, actually. I'll have to give it some serious consideration. Thank you.

Sheila-- Hey! Your feedback is always appreciated and always wonderful. Thanks so much for quoting some of your favorite parts. I'm really glad you liked the chapter. I was just relieved to get them back together and talking. Sheesh, I really disliked writing them apart. But the road can't be wholly smooth...

Ann-- Actually I wholly agree with this statement:

He changed tempers very quickly. I'm definitely going to edit that bit before I send it off to the archive. If you can't already tell I wrote both those parts in very different moods. I'm afraid it spilled over on my characters a little too much.

I feel like I should add a "Amen!" to this. I agree.

Thanks so much for your comments. For all your misgivings in the beginning, I'm very glad you've stayed on to continue reading. I appreciate it very much.

Tahu-- Sorry I made you late! Goodness, I do that a lot, too though. I start reading fan fiction and I look at the clock after what I think is five minutes and I realize a whole half hour has passed! I hope everything is okay at work, though. But thanks.

Anna-- Hey! Thanks so much.

Heh. Ask and you shall recieve... The muse struck hard tonight.

Symbolicangel-- Hey! Glad you're still reading and glad that you liked this part! Thanks so much for everything.

ClarkLovesLois-- Sequel?? *falls in dead faint of exhaustion* I'll have to see. Thanks for the feedback! I'm glad you're reading.

Vonceil-- Yay for the kiss! I'm glad you liked it. I was sick of them being apart.

MAF-- Mm... I don't know why, but I can picture Clark saying "to hell you are" very vividly actually. But that's more of a daydream run very amok. Thanks for the feedback.

JD-- Hey! They are terrible at that thing called communication... but I appreciate you taking the time to review. Thanks!

Groobie-- Thank you!!!

Elisabeth-- Thanks for explaining and I'm glad you're here.

EDIT: DJ! You snuck in here while I was posting!
Your feedback always makes me laugh. Thank you. I'm glad you like Assertive!Clark. Mm... he's a favorite of mine... And I agree. Stringing two words together might even be too difficult.

I sure hope so. Thanks!


Thank you everyone... and um... well... I'm posting chapter 13 now.

--Laura