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Trust me. 
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Beat Reporter
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Trust you? Well, if you say so, Shayne... But please, please...don't hurt Lois! Anyway, I really liked this part. I particularly liked Lois' 'If you ever really loved me...' bit.  Hehe. Just watch Clark fight that compulsion now!  ~Anna.
Lois: Jimmy, give me back my dress.
Clark: Now there's something you don't hear around the newsroom everyday.
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Top Banana
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Ok.. Shayne, I'll trust you.. but can't Clark .. I don't know accidentally cough or sneeze and blow Angelica away... please? :p  Thoroughly enjoying it..
If she had to move heaven and Earth, perhaps come back to haunt Perry and explain the story after they'd killed her, she would do it.
Waking a Miracle by Aria
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Kerth
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Now what can Clark do to Angelica which isn't quite breaking his side of the deal?
Marcus L. Rowland
Forgotten Futures, The Scientific Romance Role Playing Game
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Hack from Nowheresville
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Hack from Nowheresville
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I only promised not to shed a drop of your blood. I think this is the key. All Lois has to do is somehow get Angelica to scratch her or whatever to release just one drop of blood, then Clark can be free. I don't know anything about Buffy-verse, but I've really been enjoying this story. Keep it coming.
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Jeff
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Hack from Nowheresville
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Oh, OH OH Lois Struggle!!! fight, bite scratch, make her scrath you and clark is FREEE!! Yeah! a way to make it work, Just don't pass out at this point! OK,I'm calm now. More Soon Please!!
Johnny was a chemist,
Now Johnny is no more,
For what he thought was H two O
Was really H two S O four.
--Lab safety limrick--
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Nobel Peace Prize Winner
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Nobel Peace Prize Winner
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Trust you, Shayne? Okay, I'll hold you to that promise!
Ann
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Hack from Nowheresville
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“None of this was your fault,” Lois said. She stabbed backwards once, brutally, and felt the explosion of dust hit her neck. “You couldn’t have known this was going to happen.”
Buffy had known. In truth, deep down, Lois had known as well. Clark was too perfect to remain unsullied by this new, grimmer darker world they’d discovered.
Lois had a feeling that this side of life wasn’t a place that you entered without losing a little of yourself. Nothing was as cut and dried as it had been in the past. This is what I love about this story--its story isn't just about the Buffyverse. Looking forward to the next part.
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Kerth
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Another truly great part. Way to go, Shayne! And, please... come back soon, okay? 
The only known quantity that moves faster than
light is the office grapevine. (from Nan's fabulous Home series)
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My blod pressure is already higher than it should be, Shayne! And then you end this chapter on such a cliffhanger that it may be the most tense cliffhanger in history!
Well, maybe not in all of history, but it's pretty close.
I think Lois should turn one way or the other, doesn't matter which way or how far, and use that little bit of extra reach to jam her hand into Angelica's mouth as hard as she can. The vampire biting reflex should take over, and then all bets would be off!
Great story. Great tension. Every time I think I've got it figured out, you fool me. And that's more than okay! I love the way you're taking us into uncharted territory and giving us a little more about our favorite characters every time you post. And every little glimpse into the Buffyverse is more than I knew before, so it's a treat.
Keep it up! Where's the next chapter already?!?
Life isn't a support system for writing. It's the other way around.
- Stephen King, from On Writing
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