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Part One (1) Part Two (2)

Interesting start. How did Lois know they were married?

My I suggest a title change since "PHEROMONE, MY LOVELY" is the title of episode #109?

otherwise it gets confusing.

I love these scenarios - when Lois finds herself married to Clark, totally unexpectedly and all of a sudden, and realizing that she has consummated her marriage to him, too. So now she has to get divorced, except of course, what she really needs to do is just wrap her mind around the fact that things just couldn't be better! Married to Clark...mmmmmmmmmmmmm!!!

I love it! I want to see you take this story to the point where Lois isn't just married to Clark, but where she acknowledges that she is head-over-heels in love with him and happy as a clam about her matrimony, and all ready to do the horizontal rumba with her husband all over again... and again... and again...

I agree with Patrick, however, that it might be a good idea to change the title of your fic, at least slightly.

Looking forward to the next part!

Ann

Patrick is right. Your first title was better since the word "Rewrite" signifies something different.

But I don't remember them getting married. Hmmm....

Clark and Lois seem so polite in your story. Lois explains how she's feeling rationally instead of going ballistic and running away.

Interesting.


Elisabeth

maybe its the Pheromone hangover making her polite?

That's quite the hangover for 1st season Lois. /me grins.

Elisabeth

I actually meant to put rewrite in the post, but I must have forgotten, since it was late at night when I posted.

Anyway, I have a couple of ideas for a title. What do you think of these?

Consequences
Eau de Revenge

Let me know, please.

I hope to post the third part soon. Once I get part six posted, then, I'll have a problem. That's all I have written for now.

Eau de Revenge
(in English "Water of Revenge")

That's quite the title. I like it.

Actually I had never put 2 and 2 together to realize that Eau de on a perfume meant that it wasn't perfume at all, but toilet water. Anyway, I really think that fragrance was meant to be the water of revenge.

Elisabeth

edit (who forgot I was on James' computer and was, therefore, logged in as James--Oops!)