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FDK: Home: Vendetta 7/? #41141 03/28/07 08:37 PM
Joined: May 2003 Posts: 244 back home in good ol' Germany Sira OP Hack from Nowheresville
OP Sira Hack from Nowheresville Joined: May 2003 Posts: 244 back home in good ol' Germany	Wow! The pace is picking up and I'm glued to my screen here. I love how Lori manages to get out of that house and I could tear my hair out at the thought how close Meri and Carla were... and Titan. I'm glad though that they got Fred and it was hilarious when he and Vic both had stunners without batteries. I just love it when the villains outsmart each other... Poor Carla though... She has no idea what's really going on here. I'm assuming that Meri called for Titan telepathically? Which brings me to the last tidbit...I'm wondering, didn't Lori still have her earring? Can't she still say quite firmly "Clark" and be rescued immediately? Especially seeing as she seems to be going into labour... I hope the next part is posted soon. If not the suspense might just kill me... J/K. Sira

Re: FDK: Home: Vendetta 7/? #41142 03/29/07 01:07 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast daneel Kerth
daneel Kerth Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast	See? Disposable Minion "Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot

Re: FDK: Home: Vendetta 7/? #41143 03/29/07 01:55 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,380 Likes: 1 The Lone Star State Nan Kerth
Nan Kerth Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,380 Likes: 1 The Lone Star State	Before I wrote this part, I went back and edited the story. It seemed unlikely to me that they would let her keep any jewelry, when science is so advanced in this time that she could be carrying a communication device disguised as anything, so I had them remove her pin, earrings and wedding rings. Besides, I can't let it be too easy for them to find her <g>. And yes, Sira, how do you think Titan arrived so fast? Nan Earth is the insane asylum for the universe.

Re: FDK: Home: Vendetta 7/? #41144 03/29/07 03:31 AM
Joined: Jul 2004 Posts: 67 Southwestern Pennnsylvania jacalynsue Freelance Reporter
jacalynsue Freelance Reporter Joined: Jul 2004 Posts: 67 Southwestern Pennnsylvania	I very much love this part. One thing, Nan. You fixed one problem with the earrings with your edit, but may have created another. I know the anti-Tempus jewelry is powered by Lori's body... but I don't recall what the deal is with her earrings. If they are not in the bunker with Lori, but up in the house or in another location they will still produce a signal until the power runs out. Even if powered by her metabolism, I doubt it shuts off instantly! :-) While I'd love to have Lori safe from the bad guys, you can't make it THAT easy. So you might add a mention of the jewelry being kept somewhere soundproofed or otherwise blocked from any chance of transmission. That will sew shut a possible plot hole and keep us biting our nails wondering about other details…. ...like will Lori's water break and send amniotic fluid gushing from the roof top on a nice sunny day? What a way to reveal your hiding spot! More soon, please! Jackie Jackie N. jacalynsue@zoominternet.net

Re: FDK: Home: Vendetta 7/? #41145 03/29/07 03:50 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,764 Southwest MO C carolm Pulitzer
carolm Pulitzer C Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,764 Southwest MO	Oh NAN!!! This was a great addition to a stinky morning!!! Please let them find Lori!!! More soon!!! Carol [who is underwhelmed by this particular feedback, but still wants to assure Nan she's loving this] My articles Debt Free Blog: Normal is BROKE! Be Weird! - Under Construction

Re: FDK: Home: Vendetta 7/? #41146 03/29/07 04:39 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,644 North Carolina, USA ChiefPam Pulitzer
ChiefPam Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,644 North Carolina, USA	I haven't got time to leave the comments I'd like to, so I'll restrain myself to two: Lori rocks! Fred's a moron. Looking forward to more, PJ "You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed. He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement." "You can say that again," she told him. "I have a...." "Oh, shut up." --Stardust, Caroline K

Re: FDK: Home: Vendetta 7/? #41147 03/29/07 02:22 PM
Joined: Jul 2006 Posts: 1,883 Florida M MrsMosley Merriwether
MrsMosley Merriwether M Joined: Jul 2006 Posts: 1,883 Florida	Great chapter, Nan! I wonder if Meriel and Titan were speaking telepathically. lisa in the sky with diamonds

Re: FDK: Home: Vendetta 7/? #41148 03/30/07 07:37 PM
Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 3,166 The Bluegrass State Classicalla Pulitzer
Classicalla Pulitzer Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 3,166 The Bluegrass State	Great chapter, Nan! As I'm sure Nan could tell you, Jackie, since I believe she also used to work in OB, there wouldn't be enough amniotic fluid to cause that much of a gush. ~~Even heroes have the right to dream.~~

Re: FDK: Home: Vendetta 7/? #41149 04/03/07 07:36 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,994 In a minivan, next to Elisabet... Mister Data Pulitzer
Mister Data Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,994 In a minivan, next to Elisabet...	Still loving this story! Ohhhh, another part is out... James “…with God everything is possible.” Matthew 19:26. Also read Nan's Terran Underground!

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